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2) My problem with ‘was’, is that I think we tell later in this chapter how Pharazôns becomes ‘even more restless and eager for wealth and power than his father‘.

Posted by gandalf85:

You guys have done the vast majority of the heavy lifting, I think you've done an admirable job combining so many disparate sources into something coherent.

Thanks for the flowers, but I fully agree to ArcusCalion, that critisem of readers like you bring this work a great deal forward.

Respectfully
Findegil