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King's Writer
Join Date: Jul 2002
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Thanks for the farther explaination, I got a better picture now in most cases. But a few questions remian:
- The speech of Thorondor: Where did you include what? The report of Húrin searching entrance into the city does of course fall into Tuors time there. But did you actually insert the report of Thorondor in direct spech? - Again the battel: When Tuor withdraws to the King's Square the place is already beset with foes from North West and East. Fittingly Tuor withdraws to the south. In the original version his house and the entrace of the secret tunnel was in that direction. Does that mean in your version Tuor made an implicit turn and to the north? Respectfuly Findegil |
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Wight
Join Date: Jan 2009
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Quote:
“Now came days when Tuor had dwelt among the Gondolindrim many years. ….” . Quote:
The names of the streets can be the same because there’s no description previously. By the way, I omitted Gar Ainion, simply Place of the Ainur, Fountains of South there are Fountains of North, etc. Greetings |
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Ah, that means Morgoth army comes over the hills in the north, but the first gate to fall is the south gate of the city? Yes, that is a reasonable possibility to change thinks.
Respectfully Findegil |
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Wight
Join Date: Jan 2009
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Yes it can be possible, but not necessarily. At the time of Tuor withdraws to King's place and subsequently to the tunnel, Morgoth armies had razed Gondolin (even from the north that means the north had few enemies), and could come from wherever you want.
But the development of the battle (although very brilliant) is not so deep told, and I think we must not complicate more about this question. Greetings |
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