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Old 09-09-2015, 09:29 AM   #1
Findegil
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I think you work from an older version for your suggestion. But nonetheless your cirtisim is valid since the chapter break is unchanged. The suggested Point would read thus in our actual version:
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'Then have you seen Húrin son of Galdor, the warrior of Dor-lómin?' said Túrin.
'I have not seen him,' said Gwindor. 'But rumour of him runs through Angband that he still defies Morgoth; and Morgoth has laid a curse upon him and all his kin.'
'That I do believe,' said Túrin.>

NA-EX-48.1 <CoHTúrin in Nargothrond>

NA-EX-48b <CoH And now they arose, and departing from Eithel Ivrin they journeyed southward along the banks of Narog{, until they were taken by scouts of the Elves and brought as prisoners to the hidden stronghold}.
Thus did Túrin come to Nargothrond{.}:
> {<editorial bridge Of their southward journey the Lay tells:>}
<Lay Where Narog's torrent __ gnashed and spouted
down his stream bestrewn __ with stone and boulder,
swiftly southward __ they sought their paths,
and summer smiling __ smoothed their journey {1730}
through day on day, __ down dale and wood 5
where birds blithely __ with brimming music
thrilled and trembled __ in thronging trees.
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