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Elfchick · 07-02-2002, 12:24 PM

Oh now you got me started. Here is another poem I wrote. Its not as good as the other. I wrote it when I should have been working on science. ITs not sad like the other just some little thing I scribbled. Its really not to good.

Sword of darkness
Long and light
Forged for stongness
In the night

You can weild it
If you dare
but be warned,
For darkness is there.

Sword of light
Short yet bright
with a true hearted weilder
Will win the fight

If you are weak
It be to
Reflecting your heart
showing it to you

Sheild of night
Shinning bright
With diamonds light
Blocking blows left and right

Easy to use in a fight
Tempting apponents into sight
Blocking blows and killing the right
In you.

Sheild of light
Dull not bright
using your heart
to win the fight

Its hard to bear
For only the true
can weild its light
Using their hearts
Winning the fight

Darkness strong
Fighting for you
until it clashes with the true
then in the blink of an eye
it abandons you.

Which do you use?

07-02-2002, 12:24 PM	#1
Elfchick Pile O'Bones Join Date: Jun 2002 Location: Middle Earth Posts: 12	Oh now you got me started. Here is another poem I wrote. Its not as good as the other. I wrote it when I should have been working on science. ITs not sad like the other just some little thing I scribbled. Its really not to good. Sword of darkness Long and light Forged for stongness In the night You can weild it If you dare but be warned, For darkness is there. Sword of light Short yet bright with a true hearted weilder Will win the fight If you are weak It be to Reflecting your heart showing it to you Sheild of night Shinning bright With diamonds light Blocking blows left and right Easy to use in a fight Tempting apponents into sight Blocking blows and killing the right In you. Sheild of light Dull not bright using your heart to win the fight Its hard to bear For only the true can weild its light Using their hearts Winning the fight Darkness strong Fighting for you until it clashes with the true then in the blink of an eye it abandons you. Which do you use? __________________ Elfchick Welcome to the Barrows Land of the dead If you think being dead is boring Get a Life!