The Narn i Chîn Húrin: Beleg & Falivirn

[Findegil]

NA-RG-57: I simply meant that I agree to the change you suggested.

NA-SL-04: I think that is too specific.

Posted by Aran e-Godhellim

Hey, guys, I'm trying to make an updated version of the Narn in alliterative verse using the 2nd Narn in Lays of Beleriand as a base, and I was wondering if you'd help criticize my updated/added verses. If you will, should I make a separate thread, or just add them to the discussion here, since this has already become really verse-oriented?

I think that is worth a new thread.

Respectfully
Findegil