Tapestry of Dreams, Part 2 Discussion - The Barrow-Downs Discussion Forum

littlemanpoet · 06-16-2008, 08:04 PM

Helen, I felt lost through more than half of that last post. I suggest providing content at the front of the post similar to that at the end of the post, creating a pair of book-ends to serve as references or points of entry for the reader.

alaklondewen · 06-17-2008, 01:48 PM

Lmp, I love the involvement of Aeron and Gwyll.

Helen, the elven circle was beautiful.

I have a sprig of an idea I'm going to chew and develop. In the meantime, I'll get a post ready for Erebemlin.

As to my sporadic-ness...we found out last week that my mother has cancer, so lift prayers for us...we really need them.

mark12_30 · 06-17-2008, 03:53 PM

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Originally Posted by littlemanpoet

Helen, I felt lost through more than half of that last post. I suggest providing content at the front of the post similar to that at the end of the post, creating a pair of book-ends to serve as references or points of entry for the reader.

Er, okay. BUt it was just an echo of Aeron and Gwyll. Or maybe Aeron and Gwyll were echoing what had happened long ago (sort of how I interpreted it.) Did I ever figure out what Avarien's original name was...?

Anyway I added a couple sentences at the beginning.

Lord, please lift Alak's mom, and encourage her, and encourage all her family. And please provide all the care and wisdom that she needs.

littlemanpoet · 06-17-2008, 07:16 PM

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Lord, please lift Alak's mom, and encourage her, and encourage all her family. And please provide all the care and wisdom that she needs.

Amen.

mark12_30 · 06-22-2008, 03:18 PM

Thinking of you, alak. May the Lord give you grace and peace, and may hope abound towards you in the power of the Holy Spirit.

mark12_30 · 06-25-2008, 06:33 PM

lmp, I left you room for some more Aeron and Gwyll.

Alak, thinking of you. God's grace be abundant to you, and his peace. Keep us posted how you are, and how your mom is?

littlemanpoet · 06-25-2008, 08:10 PM

I'll see what I can do. My posting has tailed off dramatically in the last week and a half, due to other projects. I'll find time Friday or Sunday.

Nurumaiel · 06-29-2008, 12:42 PM

I'm just popping in briefly to say hello to you all. I'm so glad the story has been progressing well. I've really missed it, and missed all of you as well.

Alak, prayers going up for your mother, for you, and for all your family.

God bless!

06-17-2008, 01:48 PM	#2
alaklondewen Song of Seregon Join Date: Feb 2002 Location: Following the road less traveled Posts: 1,193	Lmp, I love the involvement of Aeron and Gwyll. Helen, the elven circle was beautiful. I have a sprig of an idea I'm going to chew and develop. In the meantime, I'll get a post ready for Erebemlin. As to my sporadic-ness...we found out last week that my mother has cancer, so lift prayers for us...we really need them. __________________ At last I understand why we have waited! This is the ending. Now not day only shall be beloved, but night too shall be beautiful and blessed and all its fear pass away!

06-22-2008, 03:18 PM	#5
mark12_30 Stormdancer of Doom Join Date: Jan 2002 Location: Elvish singing is not a thing to miss, in June under the stars Posts: 4,349	Thinking of you, alak. May the Lord give you grace and peace, and may hope abound towards you in the power of the Holy Spirit. __________________ ...down to the water to see the elves dance and sing upon the midsummer's eve.

06-25-2008, 06:33 PM	#6
mark12_30 Stormdancer of Doom Join Date: Jan 2002 Location: Elvish singing is not a thing to miss, in June under the stars Posts: 4,349	lmp, I left you room for some more Aeron and Gwyll. Alak, thinking of you. God's grace be abundant to you, and his peace. Keep us posted how you are, and how your mom is? __________________ ...down to the water to see the elves dance and sing upon the midsummer's eve.

06-29-2008, 12:42 PM	#8
Nurumaiel Vice of Twilight Join Date: Nov 2002 Location: on a mountain Posts: 1,121	I'm just popping in briefly to say hello to you all. I'm so glad the story has been progressing well. I've really missed it, and missed all of you as well. Alak, prayers going up for your mother, for you, and for all your family. God bless! __________________ In the fury of the moment I can see the Master's hand in every leaf that trembles, in every grain of sand.

06-16-2008, 08:04 PM	#1
littlemanpoet Itinerant Songster Join Date: Jan 2002 Location: The Edge of Faerie Posts: 7,066	Helen, I felt lost through more than half of that last post. I suggest providing content at the front of the post similar to that at the end of the post, creating a pair of book-ends to serve as references or points of entry for the reader.

06-25-2008, 08:10 PM	#7
littlemanpoet Itinerant Songster Join Date: Jan 2002 Location: The Edge of Faerie Posts: 7,066	I'll see what I can do. My posting has tailed off dramatically in the last week and a half, due to other projects. I'll find time Friday or Sunday.