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Old 07-26-2024, 05:56 AM   #1
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First of all, not be misunderstood: I am greatly interested in a time line and in the genealogies and will, if I can, contribute to the discussion of them! I as well think they can be great help for this project.

But (and that is a big BUT) I do not see how the result can be part of the final result of this project and I have greate doubts that under the strict rules this project has given itself, any meaning full version of either Time Line or Genalogie can be produced.

Form the start the project was one of editing text's not writing them. Our editorial additions were small and most often just single words of gramatical necessity. I can not imagin how that could be true of a Time Line that we could create. We don't have the necessary sources for that! And if we had the Tale of the Years of the first age completly, I doubt that an updated version would satisfy Arvegil145's wishes: There would be lots of dates we could not enter, so we would be decently sure of their placment, because we would not have an apropirate source text to work with. Look at the Tale of the Yeas of the second and third age as found in the Appendix of LotR. Are they what you would wish for? Probably not, but that is about what we could get under the rules of the project.

Time Lines and Genealogies do state very acurate facts. There is not much space for ambiguity in them. But facts are hard to come by in Middle-earth! The project could navigate around many hotly discussed issues only by leaving the decission to the reader. And I don't see how that could be done in Time Linies or Genealogies.

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Old 07-26-2024, 07:43 AM   #2
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The pain only begins when you try to square the 'early legendarium' with the very round 'later legendarium'.

In actuality, the adjustment to the YS altogether only involves abandoning certain events. And the birth dates should be kept as they were in the AAm, at least in spacing.
The "Final Timeline" is taken entirely from sources after the Annals of Aman, or the Annals themselves (other than Maitirussa); it's all post-LotR 'late legendarium'.

Abandoning certain events is probably the only way you could do it; for the pre-Beleriand era, I would recommend discarding everything which is sourced to the Annals. The Noldor can arrive in Beleriand, and then leave 2500 years later; what happens between is a mystery.

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Form the start the project was one of editing text's not writing them. Our editorial additions were small and most often just single words of gramatical necessity. I can not imagin how that could be true of a Time Line that we could create. We don't have the necessary sources for that! And if we had the Tale of the Years of the first age completly, I doubt that an updated version would satisfy Arvegil145's wishes: There would be lots of dates we could not enter, so we would be decently sure of their placment, because we would not have an apropirate source text to work with. Look at the Tale of the Yeas of the second and third age as found in the Appendix of LotR. Are they what you would wish for? Probably not, but that is about what we could get under the rules of the project.
If you allow simple calculations, a mostly-complete timeline of the pre-Beleriand days can be gotten by combining NoME 1.XIII.1 (the latest "Key Dates" timeline, running down to the Great Debate) with NoME 1.VII (the latest timeline of the Great March); both are written on a 1 VY = 144 sun-years timescale, and both are in something close to the "Tale of Years style", or somewhere between that and the Annals. But as you say, the further you get into relative dating, the less it becomes just editing what Tolkien wrote.

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Old 07-26-2024, 04:00 PM   #3
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Looking through the sources, and ignoring the question of dates for a bit, the full "Tale of Years" would consist of:

- Annals of Aman (years before the Trees)
- Annals of Aman (Years of the Trees, through to Awakening of the Quendi)
- NoME 1.XIII.1 (Awakening to Debate)
- A little from Annals of Aman and NoME 1.XIII.3 (fall of Angband and Utumno)
- NoME 1.VII (the Great March)
- Annals of Aman (end of the March to creation of the Sun and Moon)
- Grey Annals (full text)
- First Age Tale of Years (the fragments in WotJ, to fill out the end of the First Age)
- Tale of Years (LotR version, or from PoME if it is more complete)

There will be minor absences, but by stealing sentences from random texts you can fill them in with genuine Tolkien words.

But it still won't be what I think Findegil is saying, which is a Tolkien work. The Annals are not a Tale of Years - they go into way too much detail, often becoming the primary source for a story. The 20 years of Turin's shenanigans occupy 20 pages - the entry for FA 499 alone runs to 6 pages. You would need to pick out a sentence or two from each to capture the key events of the year, which is a very heavy editorial hand.

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Old 07-27-2024, 05:48 AM   #4
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Evidently I haven't elaborated on what exactly I meant to achieve with my proposal (I'm not completely sure myself), but what I roughly had in my mind was this:

1) For us to adopt the 'Tale of Years' of both the Second, Third and Fourth Ages as per the Appendices (+ as Huinesoron said, maybe including some entries cut from the published Appendices but found in HoME XII) - this is pretty straightforward

2) For us to adopt the Grey Annals + the Tale of Years timeline of the last 6 centuries of the First Age from HoME XI (+ again, some emendations as needed)

3) Maybe add some speculative dates from Fourth Age onwards? - of course, this is much more controversial, but I feel adding a few rough dates after the last entries to the 'Fourth Age timeline' shouldn't be too terrible, if only to convey to the readers that time went on, and things happened after the 'New Shadow', and that in the imaginary world of Tolkien's, 'we still live in the year 1960 (or rather 2024 or something) of the 7th Age'...

4) And finally, which is why I asked Huinesoron to participate in this - to try and keep the old AAm timeline (in the 'flat-world', 9.582:1 SY to VY conception) while attempting to incorporate as much as possible from the NoME and other later texts



I fundamentally disagree, however, that the style found in AAm or GA/ToY (First Age) is incompatible with, say, ToY from the Appendices - after all, even in the Appendices, the years 3018/3019 TA are overflowing with entries/events, even though previous entries might be sparce (because of course these years were far more eventful than any in the TA).

Regardless, I think a timeline is a must for this project - otherwise, how would people even orient themselves temporally, especially given the complexity and literary 'thickness' of our project.


EDIT: In regards to genealogies, they are far simpler than you might think - you just give me the names (not literally, I already know most if not all of them) of characters included in the project, plus their relationships, and I can do it in a jiffy.

EDIT 2: Speaking of orientation, does this project have any ambition towards maps?
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Old 07-27-2024, 08:18 AM   #5
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4) And finally, which is why I asked Huinesoron to participate in this - to try and keep the old AAm timeline (in the 'flat-world', 9.582:1 SY to VY conception) while attempting to incorporate as much as possible from the NoME and other later texts
On reflection, this is actually *really easy* (in principle): you just have to ignore 2 statements. The first is that there were 3100 years between the arrival in Aman and the end of the First Age; the second is that the Trees died in 888.

Ignore those, and you can just put AAm, XIII.1, XIII.3, VII, and AAm together in order. Use the VY used when each one was written, calculate out a SY date for everything, and then convert into either XIII.1 or AAm VYs (ie, 144 or 9.58 SY).

This approach takes basically every other decision out of play: about the only one left is whether the March begins 20 or 288 SY after the Debate (ie, do you use the relative or actual dating in XIII.3).

If that's of any interest to you, I can pull together a calculation spreadsheet and give you "aligned dates" for the whole period in a day or two. Even if you don't end up using it, I'm not precious about spreadsheets.

EDIT: It was less than 1 day. This calculator takes a date in VY/SY format, and when that date is counting from, and outputs a running count of "Years of Arda", plus converting that date into various systems. Edit the columns left of the yellow line; the columns in blue are running the calculations. Elessar dies in the 169,055th year of the world's existence. ^_^

If you want to make use of it, you should be able to make a copy of the spreadsheet on your own Google drive (and maybe download a copy, I'm not sure). As it's quite fragile, I'm keeping the original as view-only so it doesn't break.

Fun fact: when the AAm timescale for the ages before the Trees is used, the dates used in NoME XIII.3 & VII require the Days of Bliss to begin before the world was created.

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Old 08-02-2024, 05:03 AM   #6
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It was less than 1 day. This calculator takes a date in VY/SY format, and when that date is counting from, and outputs a running count of "Years of Arda", plus converting that date into various systems. Edit the columns left of the yellow line; the columns in blue are running the calculations. Elessar dies in the 169,055th year of the world's existence. ^_^

If you want to make use of it, you should be able to make a copy of the spreadsheet on your own Google drive (and maybe download a copy, I'm not sure). As it's quite fragile, I'm keeping the original as view-only so it doesn't break.

Fun fact: when the AAm timescale for the ages before the Trees is used, the dates used in NoME XIII.3 & VII require the Days of Bliss to begin before the world was created.

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Damn, you weren't kidding about your love of spreadsheets!

But, as someone who doesn't speak spreadsheet all that well - any chance you could put the actual or calculated AAm YT vs later NoME VY side by side? I.e. the Awaking of the Elves in the AAm is YT 1050, but (depending on the text), say, 850 VY in the NoME, and the death of the Trees is YT 1495 in the AAm but VY 888 in the NoME - adjusting for the difference in the Valian years (144 in NoME vs 9.582 in AAm), how would the adjusted ('flat-world') AAm timeline look like?
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@Findegil - can I make a giant family tree incorporating everything not discarded? Because I really itch to do so...





EDIT: is there any list of characters I'm supposed to exclude?
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