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|  08-18-2023, 09:51 PM | #34 | 
| Animated Skeleton Join Date: Aug 2023 Location: New Jersey 
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			A couple of things I noticed: In DE-EX-07b, DE-EX-07.3, DE-EX-07.6, DE-EX-09, and DE-EX-10, there are instances of "Aule" instead of "Aulë". DE-EX-04: "Yet the making of thing..." should be "Yet the making of things..." DE-EX-05: An instance of "Iluvatar" instead of "Ilúvatar". If these sorts of minor corrections are inappropriate for this stage of the project, please don't hesitate to say so. | 
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