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12-11-2018, 07:29 PM
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Wight
Join Date: Mar 2014
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Oops, I hadn't meant to pull text from a footnote. However, I really like Findegil's latest draft and don't have any suggestions other than to agree with both of ArcusCalion's suggestions.
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12-11-2018, 07:32 PM
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Quentingolmo
Join Date: Aug 2017
Posts: 525
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This is why nitpicking is good! It can lead to a restructure and a much better draft!
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