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07-03-2018, 10:54 PM
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King's Writer
Join Date: Jul 2002
Posts: 1,721
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Agreed. But I would not remove ‘and urged that contrary to Gandalf's advice Dol Guldur should not yet be molested’. It is a repetition but since we now describe the scene in retrospect, it makes the time and setting very definite, while other wise it would be vague.
Respectfully Findegil |
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07-04-2018, 09:25 AM
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Quentingolmo
Join Date: Aug 2017
Posts: 525
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Agreed.
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