* *A New Project ~~~ Revising the Ainulindale* *

[Arvegil145]

Originally Posted by Findegil

Yes, it is included in my draft version of the chapter Of the Coming of the Elves.

I am asking because I did not. I DID want to include it, and I thought it pitiable that it was excluded from my version - however, as much as I wanted, I could not find a way to incorporate it without resorting to a heavy rewording - basically, when I was finished revising it, I realized there were more words and sentences coming from me than from Tolkien - hence, I excluded it. I know this thread isn't exactly the best place to debate Of the Coming of the Elves but I am very curious about your version - maybe it could still be salvaged.