Beren and Lúthien - Changes needed

[Findegil]

Posted by Aiwendil:

Don't know if you're still around at all, Findegil, but here are my latest thoughts on unresolved points.

Yes, I am still around and will gladdly any progress we make.

BL-RG-40: We will stay with Sauron then.

BL-SL-05: Posted by Aiwendil:

In the original, he has just been talking about Boldog's mission to bring Luthien to Morgoth. But in our proposed version, no one has yet said anything about her being in Morgoth's hoard.

True, but then what does the mention of Lúthien mean at all? It is the interest of Morgoth in Lúthien that we need to tease Beren.
I may be do not rightly understand what is the non sequitar that does trouble you.

BL-EX-10: Agreed.

Respectfuly
Findegil