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A Voice That Gainsayeth
Join Date: Nov 2006
Location: In that far land beyond the Sea
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Okay, looks like the tide of events in the courtyard beat me to it... hm, I wonder if I could still write it in "flashback" or something, but I won't have time to do it today anymore anyway, then tomorrow I will see how it goes, if somebody else doesn't post again...
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Illusionary Holbytla
Join Date: Dec 2003
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Flash-back would work, or either Nogrod or I could edit our posts to include yours where it ought to go, if you post it here.
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Messenger of Hope
Join Date: Jun 2005
Location: In a tiny, insignificant little town in one of the many States.
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This sounds good. I don't want to miss that exchange.
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A Voice That Gainsayeth
Join Date: Nov 2006
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Done
I think it should be fine where it is, as it basically covers the timeframe from awhile back when the mess had started until the present, just from Hilderinc's point of view, so it is basically re-running the same events. And I have sort of assumed what Nog had posted then taking place: the soldiers and others doing as Hilderinc had commanded and everybody getting ready in the end. There is also a message for Léof in the end, which can be used however you see fit, Firefoot ![]() I see I have delved into Hilderinc's psychology even a bit more than I thought, but I sort of had to make it clear why he acted the way he did, especially since you two, Firefoot and Foley, seemed to be interested in that, or seemed to have your own assumptions as to how he's going to act.
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"Should the story say 'he ate bread,' the dramatic producer can only show 'a piece of bread' according to his taste or fancy, but the hearer of the story will think of bread in general and picture it in some form of his own." -On Fairy-Stories |
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Illusionary Holbytla
Join Date: Dec 2003
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I like it, Legate.
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I'll try to continue Wynflaed early tomorrow.
In the meantime, here's a heads-up for a new game I'm trying to get off the ground, which takes some of the suggested RP reforms into account. It's intended to be short, intense, and have opportunities for the players who would just like to wander in on the action as well as the ones glued to their computers. It's called The King's Players (for now), and I hope you'll check it out!
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A Voice That Gainsayeth
Join Date: Nov 2006
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Glad that you do
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