Scarburg Meadhall Discussion Thread

[Firefoot]

For clarification - are the Scarburg folk riding out to the homesteads of the local lords, or are the local lords coming to Scarburg again? I feel like I missed something.

[Legate of Amon Lanc]

Originally Posted by Firefoot

For clarification - are the Scarburg folk riding out to the homesteads of the local lords, or are the local lords coming to Scarburg again? I feel like I missed something.

I was under the impression that we are going after them, to their own homesteads.

And I have posted, seems at last it is out. Dury, let me know if I have handled Coen incorrectly, or if you want me to edit in some way his words - I wanted to post only as much as I needed to keep the conversation running the way it should. I have ended my post with the assumption that Coen will also figure out what had happened (or at least part of it, that is, that Hilderinc saw either Lithor or Erbrand or both riding away), and I made Hilderinc realise it himself too (as I wrote it, I thought that it seemed logical, it would be pretty dumb of Hilderinc not to realise at least the basic possibility). If there is a different way you want the things to unfold, or, more like if Coen reacts in some unusual way or does not react at all, I can edit the ending...

That said, I think it is not so bad yet, and in fact, the subject is already outdated, but this is upon Coen to handle now...

[Nogrod]

Originally Posted by Firefoot

For clarification - are the Scarburg folk riding out to the homesteads of the local lords, or are the local lords coming to Scarburg again?

Scarburg folk are riding today.

I'll try to make a post today... not to send us riding as yet, but to continue preparations...

[littlemanpoet]

Friends, you may notice (or maybe not) that my posts on this rpg tend to a certain type of language pattern, or "sense". I do this because I want my characters to sound like Eorling folks. When I write for this rpg, I "hear" the language of the post in my head, trying to make it sound authentic.

Here's my offer. If you would like me to offer word choices or phrase choices to help you make your posts more Eorling in style and sense, please say so. I will limit what I do to making suggestions, and it's entirely up to you whether you use them. You will not hurt my feelings if you choose not to take me up on this, and you will not hurt my feelings if you ask for my aid and choose not to use my suggestions. In fact, I think I'll probably have fun just offering the suggestions if you use them or not.

I will not offer my opinions about your posts unless you ask me to, because the last thing I want to do is offend a fellow rpg'r.

Just let me know that you'd like to have some suggestions from me, and either tell me which post you want help with, or if you prefer, I'm fine with PMing also. And if nobody responds to this post, that doesn't hurt my feelings either.