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Foley & Dury: In the situation between the three I'm not willing to make any more decisons on your behalf. Lord Athanar takes the initiative now but only by asking them what's going on. You should react before I continue.
If you want to write any more forwards I can say that lord Athanar would naturally be annoyed he had been not told the facts immediately (if the two or either of them will talk) but he woud be easily persuaded to understand he hadn't given them too much time to say anything. And his basic leaning towards the two is positive; Coen for his expereince and trust on him and Thornden because he thinks he's a good man (with the little experience he has of him) and because he needs to be in good relations with him - having Thornden rebelling would be disasterous...
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I'm sorry, I've been very busy. I have two weeks left in the semester. I will try to post as soon as I can.
If you want to move on, not a big deal obviously. If you want to just make Coen say that he thinks Lithor may have been involved, you can do that, but I know no one necessarily wants to handle that. I realize I needed to make the move here to continue it but I just haven't had the time, sorry. |
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Eorl, 1). Wynflaed is meeting Saeryn in the hall, not the kitchen. So I don't know what's going on with Kara now, but maybe she should be interacting with the women who are still there.
2). Wynflaed has a firm step, not a silken tread. A small thing, I know, but it can speak volumes about the character.
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It's not like anyone else has seen Thornen see Lithor ride off, as they would have then seen the direction Lithor and Erbrand ride off as well. Unless Thornen confesses himself, (which would NOT be a prudent move), I don't see how anyone could ever get wise to what Thornen had seen of Lithor. . Last edited by Eorl of Rohan; 04-30-2010 at 12:43 AM. |
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If you Foley think Thornden would say nothing, just post something or tell us here he will turn on his heels and go. If he will say something though, then feel free to use lord Athanar in your post along the lines I specified in my earlier post here in the admin thread - or PM me for any responses you'd like to have from lord Athanar.
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I sent Durelin a PM telling her that Thornden would say nothing, so it's really up to Coenred to mention Lithor, if anyone does at this point in time. Since what Coen will say will have so much affect on my character, I'd rather not decide if he says anything or what he says. I plan on having Thornden say nothing at all, but those plans might change, depending on what Coenred says, or what Athanar asks, etc....this is a place where it would be lots of fun for all the characters' writers to write. Hopefully Durelin will have some time to post eventually. I'm willing to wait...I just got impatient because everyone was absolutely silent for days.
As for Thornden, he is ready to go and do what Athanar told him - get a couple small search parties to search the marshes and then oversee a search over the immediate vicinity. Mnemo, I'll post for Saeryn hopefully later today. -- Foley EDIT: I realized that sounded too authoritarian. I didn't mean that. ... We can continue, if you want to, Nogrod, I just don't want to write for Coenred.
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![]() But I think we have enough things to settle without that twist right now, or what do you think?
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![]() But, on the other hand, things MIGHT turn out that Thornden is forced into saying something. One never knows when you play with multiple players. I'm willing to wait for Dury. I'm really excited again. -- Foley
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I got a post up for Saeryn, and it's actually half way decent. I went back to read my previous post that I'd written for Saeryn for when Erbrand left, and I saw there that I had mentiond that Saeryn had seen Lithor riding away, too, so Thornden is not the only one who knows that Lithor has deserted.
Mnemo, it's your go. Nogrod, you good to post next with the men in the courtyard, or do you want me to say anything? -- Foley
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Nudging it just a little....
Okay, so what needs to happen here? Mnemo can post for Wynflaed. Lommy or I can post for the kiddos. Someone could post for Frodides in the kitchen (I'm considering doing that myself so that Loslote and Eorl can write something). Nogrod or Dury can post something with the Thornden, Coen, and Athanar triangle, or if no one wants to say anything further, one of us can get the search parties under way. Lommy can post for any one of her characters... Legate is kind of held up waiting for the search parties to start.
I don't know where any one else's characters are, so if you're around, but I didn't mention you, and you would like to post, fire ahead. -- Foley
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I've been waiting for Dury to post as in a sense my posting there last time already forced the situation for you two's characters (lord Athanar making guesses meant the two hadn't voluntarily or fast enough brought the subject forwards - which is in a sense important as it makes them reluctant to open the issue) so I'd hate to force things on your characters another time (finalising the fact that given a possibility to speak they both decide to keep their mouths shut). But if Dury isn't posting in a day or two I think we should call it off and the search should begin - and thus make it a fact neither of the two wished to speak their minds to their lord.
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Oh...Nogrod...Durelin did post. She squeezed something in there. It surprised me because she had thought she couldn't post for a while, and it ended up that she could. So, unless I'm mistaken, you can go ahead and write something.
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I squeezed something in as well, but I don't want to make the decisions on behalf of Thornden. So it's up to you now Foley.
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Gee thanks, Noggy. Just the question Thornden wanted put to him.
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Aweseom, Mnemo. I'm not quite sure how I'll smack you if you can't get around to writing it, though.
I posted for Thornden. And sometime earlier, someone asked, "How will Athanar ever find out that Thornden HAD seen Lithor and Erbrand running?" and the answer just came to me. When Lithor stopped and looked down at the drill, he paused for a long time, unsheathed his sword, and dropped it, before riding away - all while making eye contact with Thornden. Therefore, any one of the soldiers might have seen him, and, if they had looked, also seen Thornden. I can really picture Quin seeing it, but if anyone (like Legate's character) wants to have their character observe it, that would work, too. The only problem I see with having Legate's character see it is that he would say something NOW and put the search parties on the right track, whereas Quin may be completely oblivious, not even know that who he saw was Lithor and that they're searching for him, and end up not saying anything until later, after Erbrand and Lithor have had a chance to make their escape. What do y'all think? -- Foley
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Hmm... it would be most interesting if I could come up with a reason for Hilderinc not to tell the truth in this situation as well, or not at least from the beginning and pretend to be just stupid or oblivious. I don't see it as completely impossible, but it will certainly be a challenge for me to think of a way to make it make sense.
One way how to "save it" would be if only Thornden approached him (and Coen would e.g. just go ahead to quickly rouse the rest of the men, leaving Thornden to explain to Hilderinc and appoint them to gather search parties on their own or something), that way, Hilderinc only would talk to Thornden (I could make Áforglaed react to the news and then just briefly take a look at Scyrr, so he'd be out of the way too). It might be then up to Thornden to either convince Hilderinc not to tell anything (ai, ai? If you, Folwren, want a challenge, then this would definitely be one; we also could make it a co-post) or to somehow avoid the question "but sir, didn't Lithor actually talk to you or something?" It would be an interesting thing if it could be done, like, how much it takes to convince Hilderinc that Erbrand is harmless and he should be let alone and whatnot, or if Thornden is going to outright lie (somehow I pity him, he got into this horrible situation and it seems he just cannot stop lying... that's exactly how this web of lies forms and spreads)... But if it does not work, we can leave it be and make some other soldier notice.
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Ooo, Afo's dropping in, does this mean that Scyrr has a chance of posting?
PS. By the way, Foley, our roleplay thread 'Homeward Bound' is only waiting for your character bio in order to start! |
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![]() ![]() Legate, I don't quite know if I understand you, but I am quite up to a challenge and would love to do a combined post with you. We should start sooner than later. I'll work on my bio for Eorl's game, and then I'll see about starting a PM post and sending it to you. By the time we finish writing it, Nogrod and/or Durelin may have posted and gotten Thornden and Coen on their way away from lord Athanar. Unless....Nogrod and Durelin, do you mind if, after a while, one of you haven't posted, can Legate, Eorl, or I move things along out there? -- Foley
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