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Estelo dagnir, Melo ring
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Let me know if there are problems with my post, and if anyone (esp Foley) would like me to edit in anything from their character. I know I pushed things forward.
Annnd Athanar is now being attacked by three men at once! Heh. I left my post as agreeing with Nogrod's that Scyrr has external bleeding (I mentioned Athanar having blood on his hands and sleeves), and so will edit if need be when that's sorted out. |
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![]() That way I'd need only to edit out the short passage where Athanar tells his son to take care of the "other wounds"... and those orders could be easily changed into "don't just stand there, get some help!" or something... and no one else I think would need to change anything? So the simplest scenario but also a bed for some further disagreements (which we don't have to use but which we can if we wish)? Would that be okay?
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Messenger of Hope
Join Date: Jun 2005
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I thought he would just be coughing up blood. If he has external wounds, better it be on other parts of his body - the throat seems so fragile, so vulnerable, that a knife in that region would surely mean death. My two cents.
Dury, I'm fine with what you posted. Only, I did add Thornden mentioning Lithor's name. Nothing explicit, but would Coen not notice? Have to get back to class. -- Foley
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Okay. Lord Athanar has given his orders for the search parties.
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![]() One thing I especially like with this setting is that it seems no one yet knows Lithor has vanished as well... anyone willing to come up with the realisation of that fact should do it. It will be interesting to see how different people react to that.
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But, then, I like excitement for my characters. So I don't think I will have him hold his peace. I'll post tomorrow sometime. -- Foley P.S. Ah, one more thing - Eorl, Scyrr is your character. No one has any right to tell you how badly wounded your character is, whether or not it is likely that he would survive such wounds as the rest of us are imagining. If you do not want him to be cut up, he doesn't have to be cut up. If you don't mind, then it's fine the way it is, but you have every right and every rule in the book to back you up if you decide that you want any of our posts changed in order to make Scyrr's condition more to your imagining. But if you're worried about Erbrand....stop worrying. No matter if Scyrr has been cut with a knife or not, Erbrand is already practically charged with murder, so a scratch that hasn't killed him won't make anything better or worse. We need not worry about it, though - they won't be brought to bay, that much is already written out, unbeknownst to all of our characters running around like chickens with their heads cut off.
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Estelo dagnir, Melo ring
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Yes I need to edit my post because I was bad and didn't re-read Foleys post before posting, and so did not acknowledge what Thornden said about Lithor. Which definitely would be acknowledged, lol. Thank you Foley for pointing that out, and thanks so much for being so nice about the edit.
Y'all are going crazy on the thread, too...not sure I'm going to be able to keep up! Edit: Perhaps Coen and Thornden should inform Athanar that Lithor may be involved as well? That would take an edit on Nogrod's part which I don't want to ask him to do. Sorry, there was kinda a flurry of posting there lol. Either way, I don't care. Last edited by Durelin; 04-22-2010 at 01:24 PM. |
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I looked and saw that you edited your post some, but not enough to make anything change..... I'm looking forward to see what you all decide about telling Athanar or not... I need to get to class. -- Foley
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