An Adventure of Hobbit Proportions Discussion Thread - The Barrow-Downs Discussion Forum

Legate of Amon Lanc · 09-21-2008, 06:48 PM

All right, a double-post. I have posted already, now I think it's up to Gwath's character to react or if somebody else wants to interrupt the scene by coming inside... Anyway, I tried to make the tension-filled, yet kind of still situation just a little more tension-filled.

And just a note, even though it's not been said explicitely anywhere, I have presumed that Bunny had left the common room with the others, as both Gwath's and Kitanna's posts presume that nobody else from the party remained in the room (at least Kitanna's post presumes Peony to be the last one going outside, which seems quite plain).

Valier · 09-22-2008, 04:08 PM

I posted as well. hope it works.

took me awhile to get back into the writing groove but I think the post will serve.

Legate can you do one thing to your last post.... can you add Brown's name in there, perhaps have him introduce himself. I got a little confused while reading it, and only after I read your post here did it make sense. I wasn't quite sure who you meant. (post was great by the way

)

Oh and if I used any ones characters inappropriately let me know and I can change my post.

Legate of Amon Lanc · 09-23-2008, 09:42 AM

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Originally Posted by Valier

Legate can you do one thing to your last post.... can you add Brown's name in there, perhaps have him introduce himself. I got a little confused while reading it, and only after I read your post here did it make sense. I wasn't quite sure who you meant. (post was great by the way

)

Well, I thought that in the context it would be clear who it's about (when you keep reading not just single post, but in the continuation of the story, and thus read the first Gwath's post; and especially after there's going to be some continuing post after that). But I will look to it and see what kind of correction would be appropriate, if so.

Valier · 09-23-2008, 10:23 AM

If you think Your post is ok the way it is, I'm Ok with it as well Gwath.

Valier · 09-23-2008, 08:28 PM

Aright I've been giving it some thought as to how we should handle this death in our group. I don't really want to have a funeral (unless you others think we should

) I was thinking of having us linger at the Inn for perhaps the night.

I thought perhaps a good way of handling this would be to have a relative of Hugo's in Budgeford, since Frogmorton is not too far away. Have them show up and offer to take Hugo's body home. Also this would be a good time for us to have Mira go home, at the insistence of the adult relative. That is however up to you Boromir, if you would like to continue writing for Rudy and Mira then she can refuse. Then as all this is happening Bunny will announce that she is going on in the morning. This gives us all a reason to post if our characters go on with the journey (which I'm hoping they will)

I would like to get us on the road again as I have some things planned that I would like to set into motion

Legate of Amon Lanc · 09-24-2008, 02:58 AM

Well, my character's not actually involved in this, but just from the RPGer's point of view, I think that's a good idea, Valier (I almost wrote Bunny

).

And yay, I am looking forward to what you have thought of for the journey

Valier · 09-25-2008, 02:15 PM

So is everyone busy this week then? I would like it if everyone could let everyone else know when they are able to post. I want this thing to start and keep going, not die out again. I believe anyone can post, no need to wait

09-21-2008, 06:48 PM	#1
Legate of Amon Lanc A Voice That Gainsayeth Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: In that far land beyond the Sea Posts: 7,431	All right, a double-post. I have posted already, now I think it's up to Gwath's character to react or if somebody else wants to interrupt the scene by coming inside... Anyway, I tried to make the tension-filled, yet kind of still situation just a little more tension-filled. And just a note, even though it's not been said explicitely anywhere, I have presumed that Bunny had left the common room with the others, as both Gwath's and Kitanna's posts presume that nobody else from the party remained in the room (at least Kitanna's post presumes Peony to be the last one going outside, which seems quite plain). __________________ "Should the story say 'he ate bread,' the dramatic producer can only show 'a piece of bread' according to his taste or fancy, but the hearer of the story will think of bread in general and picture it in some form of his own." -On Fairy-Stories

09-22-2008, 04:08 PM	#2
Valier Twisted Taleswapper Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: somewhere between sanity and insanity Posts: 1,706	I posted as well. hope it works. took me awhile to get back into the writing groove but I think the post will serve. Legate can you do one thing to your last post.... can you add Brown's name in there, perhaps have him introduce himself. I got a little confused while reading it, and only after I read your post here did it make sense. I wasn't quite sure who you meant. (post was great by the way) Oh and if I used any ones characters inappropriately let me know and I can change my post. __________________ grand return?........ Last edited by Valier; 09-23-2008 at 12:43 AM.

09-23-2008, 10:23 AM	#4
Valier Twisted Taleswapper Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: somewhere between sanity and insanity Posts: 1,706	If you think Your post is ok the way it is, I'm Ok with it as well Gwath. __________________ grand return?........

09-23-2008, 08:28 PM	#5
Valier Twisted Taleswapper Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: somewhere between sanity and insanity Posts: 1,706	Aright I've been giving it some thought as to how we should handle this death in our group. I don't really want to have a funeral (unless you others think we should) I was thinking of having us linger at the Inn for perhaps the night. I thought perhaps a good way of handling this would be to have a relative of Hugo's in Budgeford, since Frogmorton is not too far away. Have them show up and offer to take Hugo's body home. Also this would be a good time for us to have Mira go home, at the insistence of the adult relative. That is however up to you Boromir, if you would like to continue writing for Rudy and Mira then she can refuse. Then as all this is happening Bunny will announce that she is going on in the morning. This gives us all a reason to post if our characters go on with the journey (which I'm hoping they will) I would like to get us on the road again as I have some things planned that I would like to set into motion __________________ grand return?........

09-24-2008, 02:58 AM	#6
Legate of Amon Lanc A Voice That Gainsayeth Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: In that far land beyond the Sea Posts: 7,431	Well, my character's not actually involved in this, but just from the RPGer's point of view, I think that's a good idea, Valier (I almost wrote Bunny ). And yay, I am looking forward to what you have thought of for the journey __________________ "Should the story say 'he ate bread,' the dramatic producer can only show 'a piece of bread' according to his taste or fancy, but the hearer of the story will think of bread in general and picture it in some form of his own." -On Fairy-Stories

09-25-2008, 02:15 PM	#7
Valier Twisted Taleswapper Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: somewhere between sanity and insanity Posts: 1,706	So is everyone busy this week then? I would like it if everyone could let everyone else know when they are able to post. I want this thing to start and keep going, not die out again. I believe anyone can post, no need to wait __________________ grand return?........