An Adventure of Hobbit Proportions Discussion Thread - The Barrow-Downs Discussion Forum

Finduilas · 01-09-2008, 11:37 AM

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Originally Posted by littlemanpoet

I don't follow. What would need to be changed and shuffled?

Our entrance to Peony's for one. And to have her eavesdrop, but she could join around the same time as Rudy and Hugo, she could hear anything about the adventure that Mira would tell them.

This is only, in a way, my first RPG (my other first isn't going to quickly), so I don't know if you do things occasionaly out of order like this. If it's fine with others, I wont fuss, and I understand there really isn't any good way to change things that have already happened. But the way that your and Iras' post goes, it's kind of confusing. I don't know, maybe I'm easily confused, but if I were reading just the RPG and not the discussion thread, I would wonder where and when those posts were happening, because last I knew, we (Mira, Rudy and Hugo) were all drinking tea at Melilots.

littlemanpoet · 01-09-2008, 08:46 PM

I see what happened. I'm sorry, Finduilas. I'm afraid that I didn't remember what had happened in posts 25 & 26 when I started brainstorming how to include Lizzy. Umm.....

I guess we need to revise things a bit. Oops.

I've just added a post # 35 to try and draw this into the rest of the story.

I think the best way to go with this is to take posts 32 - 35 and insert them between 25 & 26, making whatever changes in 26 needed to smooth out the transitions.

Sorry for creating this headache for everyone.

Valier · 01-10-2008, 08:25 AM

Ahhh I see what happened....lets see if we can get Pio to help us rearrange a bit. I will pm her when I get home from work today. Sorry about not getting my post up yesterday. I will put in a save right now and will fill it today a.s.a.p. please everyone else if you can post, please do.

littlemanpoet · 01-10-2008, 09:40 AM

Iras, if you want to have Lizzy reply to Gaffer Hugo, perhaps you could post it here and then we can have Pio add it to the moved posts on the thread. Sound good?

Finduilas · 01-10-2008, 01:55 PM

Where is Boromir?

Kitanna · 01-16-2008, 09:12 PM

My internet has been pretty unstable these past few days and so I haven't been able to make a decent post. However, Fin and I may be starting another PM conversation and we need LMP and/or Boro to join. Would that work for you two to have a PM conversation bringing at least one other member of Mira's family into the adventure. Then the other and Iras can join.

littlemanpoet · 01-17-2008, 09:52 AM

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Originally Posted by Kitanna

My internet has been pretty unstable these past few days and so I haven't been able to make a decent post. However, Fin and I may be starting another PM conversation and we need LMP and/or Boro to join. Would that work for you two to have a PM conversation bringing at least one other member of Mira's family into the adventure. Then the other and Iras can join.

I'd be happy to join the PM conversation. And I think it would be great for Iras to join, sooner than later.

piosenniel · 01-10-2008, 04:15 PM

DONE

Those posts of Iras and lmp are now moved so that they follow post #25.. (HERE).

They are now collectively post #26.

And what was #26 (Valier's post of 12/18), is now #27. So - if anything needs to be smoothed out now - Valier can insert it into that post of hers.

Valier · 01-10-2008, 05:04 PM

Ok I've filled my save, have a read and let me know if anything needs to be changed.
Gwath can you have fred and brown and us discuss the adventure and get brown going. then we can have reaction posts from Lommy and myself.

And yes where is Boro and Sephiroth.....worrying..

littlemanpoet · 01-10-2008, 05:11 PM

Thanks so much, Pio!

Gwathagor · 01-10-2008, 07:37 PM

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Originally Posted by Valier

Gwath can you have fred and brown and us discuss the adventure and get brown going. then we can have reaction posts from Lommy and myself.

I'm on it.

Valier · 01-10-2008, 08:31 PM

Yes thank you Pio!

Iras I think there is a problem with your last post. just go back to the post near the top of your with every ones posts on it and edit it to add that last bit. because now it is at the bottom. You'll need to delete the last post and just edit in your lines.

Gwathagor · 01-11-2008, 12:16 AM

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Originally Posted by Valier

Gwath can you have fred and brown and us discuss the adventure and get brown going. then we can have reaction posts from Lommy and myself.

Is there anyway in particular this conversation ought to go? I'm working on the post (yes, I'm NOT doing it off the cuff for once), and I'm not entirely sure how to portray Tansy and Bunny. How far should I take the conversation? Maybe just a few sentences in, and then let Valier and Thinlomien finish it off with a few swift blows to the neck and head? Suggestions?

01-10-2008, 08:25 AM	#3
Valier Twisted Taleswapper Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: somewhere between sanity and insanity Posts: 1,706	Ahhh I see what happened....lets see if we can get Pio to help us rearrange a bit. I will pm her when I get home from work today. Sorry about not getting my post up yesterday. I will put in a save right now and will fill it today a.s.a.p. please everyone else if you can post, please do. __________________ grand return?........

01-10-2008, 01:55 PM	#5
Finduilas Ghost Prince of Cardolan Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: Home. Where rolling green hills and clear rivers are practically my backyard. Posts: 595	Where is Boromir? __________________ One (1) book of rules and traffic regulations, which may not be bent or broken. ~ The Phantom Tollbooth

01-16-2008, 09:12 PM	#6
Kitanna Child of the West Join Date: Dec 2003 Location: Watching President Fillmore ride a unicorn Posts: 2,132	My internet has been pretty unstable these past few days and so I haven't been able to make a decent post. However, Fin and I may be starting another PM conversation and we need LMP and/or Boro to join. Would that work for you two to have a PM conversation bringing at least one other member of Mira's family into the adventure. Then the other and Iras can join. __________________ "Let us live so that when we come to die even the undertaker will be sorry." - Mark Twain

01-10-2008, 04:15 PM	#8
piosenniel Desultory Dwimmerlaik Join Date: Mar 2002 Location: Pickin' flowers with Bill the Cat..... Posts: 7,779	DONE Those posts of Iras and lmp are now moved so that they follow post #25.. (HERE). They are now collectively post #26. And what was #26 (Valier's post of 12/18), is now #27. So - if anything needs to be smoothed out now - Valier can insert it into that post of hers. __________________ Eldest, that’s what I am . . . I knew the dark under the stars when it was fearless - before the Dark Lord came from Outside.

01-10-2008, 05:04 PM	#9
Valier Twisted Taleswapper Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: somewhere between sanity and insanity Posts: 1,706	Ok I've filled my save, have a read and let me know if anything needs to be changed. Gwath can you have fred and brown and us discuss the adventure and get brown going. then we can have reaction posts from Lommy and myself. And yes where is Boro and Sephiroth.....worrying.. __________________ grand return?........

01-09-2008, 08:46 PM	#2
littlemanpoet Itinerant Songster Join Date: Jan 2002 Location: The Edge of Faerie Posts: 7,066	I see what happened. I'm sorry, Finduilas. I'm afraid that I didn't remember what had happened in posts 25 & 26 when I started brainstorming how to include Lizzy. Umm..... I guess we need to revise things a bit. Oops. I've just added a post # 35 to try and draw this into the rest of the story. I think the best way to go with this is to take posts 32 - 35 and insert them between 25 & 26, making whatever changes in 26 needed to smooth out the transitions. Sorry for creating this headache for everyone. Last edited by littlemanpoet; 01-09-2008 at 08:56 PM.

01-10-2008, 09:40 AM	#4
littlemanpoet Itinerant Songster Join Date: Jan 2002 Location: The Edge of Faerie Posts: 7,066	Iras, if you want to have Lizzy reply to Gaffer Hugo, perhaps you could post it here and then we can have Pio add it to the moved posts on the thread. Sound good?

01-10-2008, 05:11 PM	#10
littlemanpoet Itinerant Songster Join Date: Jan 2002 Location: The Edge of Faerie Posts: 7,066	Thanks so much, Pio!

01-10-2008, 08:31 PM	#12
Valier Twisted Taleswapper Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: somewhere between sanity and insanity Posts: 1,706	Yes thank you Pio! Iras I think there is a problem with your last post. just go back to the post near the top of your with every ones posts on it and edit it to add that last bit. because now it is at the bottom. You'll need to delete the last post and just edit in your lines. __________________ grand return?........