The Fellowship of the Fourth Age (Part 1): A New Beginning Discussion Thread - The Barrow-Downs Discussion Forum

Nogrod · 12-29-2007, 04:41 PM

Changes made. The two sisters are outside the scene now.

It's kind of a good twist to the plot indeed that they're away as well as Rôg. Makes the future a bit more complicated... trust gained can be easily lost and that's a part of a gripping story.

Folwren · 12-29-2007, 05:45 PM

Hey, everyone. I apologize about not posting today or yesterday, as I had hoped. Tomorrow I should have plenty of time to write something. I will do my best to get a post up.

-- Folwren

Child of the 7th Age · 12-30-2007, 02:58 AM

Post up....

Nogrod - I assume that the third female orc in your revised post must be Gwella. Could you possibly remove her from that earlier scene and have just two female orcs make the plea? I had planned and written this based on your ORIGINAL post when you had used Undomie's two sisters. I didn't realize you'd involved Gwella. If necessary, I'll delete my own post but I'd rather not do that.

Tevildo · 12-30-2007, 12:56 PM

I'm kind of rusty so I hope this is ok. I'll try to do better posting. If the story picks up, it's easier to write. I also hope it's alright that I used Gwella. If anything needs changing, tell me. So far. no one in the other group knows what's going on by the pit.

Nogrod · 12-30-2007, 01:16 PM

My post is revised. From five female orcs we've come down to two... I have now named them in the post being Urga (NPC named earlier by Regin) and Ungolt (Regin's character). You were right Child, the third one was meant to be Gwella.

Please let me know if either or both of the two remaining females wish to get out and I'll think the whole post a new.

So the incident at the flooding pit is developing then? Good.

But at least I would like to read a reaction or two from around the execution as well. I mean that's quite a situation: orcs begging for mercy on behalf of other orcs... and the kid (Grask) as well...

I'll write some myself if I have time today as I still have Hadith and Beloan (as a shared character with Dury). But it would be nice to see other reactions as well. All of the fellowship is there (except Rôg it seems), all the played characters should be there...

12-29-2007, 04:41 PM	#1
Nogrod Flame of the Ainulindalë Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: Wearing rat's coat, crowskin, crossed staves in a field behaving as the wind behaves Posts: 9,308	Changes made. The two sisters are outside the scene now. It's kind of a good twist to the plot indeed that they're away as well as Rôg. Makes the future a bit more complicated... trust gained can be easily lost and that's a part of a gripping story. __________________ Upon the hearth the fire is red Beneath the roof there is a bed; But not yet weary are our feet...

12-29-2007, 05:45 PM	#2
Folwren Messenger of Hope Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: In a tiny, insignificant little town in one of the many States. Posts: 5,076	Hey, everyone. I apologize about not posting today or yesterday, as I had hoped. Tomorrow I should have plenty of time to write something. I will do my best to get a post up. -- Folwren __________________ A young man who wishes to remain a sound atheist cannot be too careful of his reading. - C.S. Lewis

12-30-2007, 02:58 AM	#3
Child of the 7th Age Spirit of the Lonely Star Join Date: Mar 2002 Posts: 5,133	Post up.... Nogrod - I assume that the third female orc in your revised post must be Gwella. Could you possibly remove her from that earlier scene and have just two female orcs make the plea? I had planned and written this based on your ORIGINAL post when you had used Undomie's two sisters. I didn't realize you'd involved Gwella. If necessary, I'll delete my own post but I'd rather not do that. __________________ Multitasking women are never too busy to vote. Last edited by Child of the 7th Age; 12-30-2007 at 03:26 AM.

12-30-2007, 12:56 PM	#4
Tevildo Shade of Carn Dûm Join Date: Nov 2004 Location: Curled up on Melko's lap Posts: 425	I'm kind of rusty so I hope this is ok. I'll try to do better posting. If the story picks up, it's easier to write. I also hope it's alright that I used Gwella. If anything needs changing, tell me. So far. no one in the other group knows what's going on by the pit. __________________ Now Tevildo was a mighty cat--the mightiest of all--and possessed of an evil spirit,...and he was in Melko's constant following; and that cat had all cats subject to him, and he and his subjects were the chasers and getters of meat for Melko's table.

12-30-2007, 01:16 PM	#5
Nogrod Flame of the Ainulindalë Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: Wearing rat's coat, crowskin, crossed staves in a field behaving as the wind behaves Posts: 9,308	My post is revised. From five female orcs we've come down to two... I have now named them in the post being Urga (NPC named earlier by Regin) and Ungolt (Regin's character). You were right Child, the third one was meant to be Gwella. Please let me know if either or both of the two remaining females wish to get out and I'll think the whole post a new. So the incident at the flooding pit is developing then? Good. But at least I would like to read a reaction or two from around the execution as well. I mean that's quite a situation: orcs begging for mercy on behalf of other orcs... and the kid (Grask) as well... I'll write some myself if I have time today as I still have Hadith and Beloan (as a shared character with Dury). But it would be nice to see other reactions as well. All of the fellowship is there (except Rôg it seems), all the played characters should be there... __________________ Upon the hearth the fire is red Beneath the roof there is a bed; But not yet weary are our feet...