The Fellowship of the Fourth Age (Part 1): A New Beginning Discussion Thread - The Barrow-Downs Discussion Forum

Tevildo · 08-22-2007, 01:11 AM

My save is finally filled. I think Dorran may be in hot water.

Azhar is asking Athwen to go with her and the children.....

Nogrod · 08-23-2007, 01:49 PM

I'm so sorry I have been taken away from this the last weeks - and will be hands full of work for a few days still.

Just work from early morning to over midnight every day...

But I'll be back as soon as I can. Within a week I hope. Let's see how we can turn the tide...

Durelin · 08-23-2007, 10:23 PM

I'll do my best to get a post up very soon that brings the orcs out of the pit (they're still in the pit, right? Err...) and close to execution.

But if anyone wants to do that, feel free to jump in. If you want to cover anything else before that, put a save up or let me know, or both.

And then we just have to work out the 'rescue' so to speak. *is excited* This is great stuff!

Durelin · 08-30-2007, 01:17 PM

Forgive the double post...

I have finally posted. The execution has commenced.

Alright, so, my post is a little weird...I was kinda in a weird mood...it also is a little dramatic...perhaps too dramatic. Basically I have it so that the executioners are poised to kill when the Orc women and/or children come to the condemned Orcs' aid.

Too dramatic? What we had in mind? Was I too vague?

Just let me know.

Also...do we have Orc women and children around to step in?

Folwren · 08-30-2007, 01:37 PM

I liked it. I don't think it was too dramatic, either. Poor Athwen, though.

Hey, Durelin, I had an idea. If Khamir really thinks as badly of Athwen as your previous post made out, it might be humorous if sometime fairly shortly, he is wounded and comes under her care. We could make something interesting of it, and you could do a great deal of interesting character development there. what do you think?

-- Folwren

Durelin · 08-30-2007, 01:43 PM

Thank you. ^_^

And yes, that sounds awesome! Khamir actually holds great respect for Athwen because he's seen her work so hard to help people, so it will be a very interesting conflict when he's actually forced to confront her, and particularly in a situation where he is the one in the weaker position.

I'll look out for an opportunity for that.

08-22-2007, 01:11 AM	#1
Tevildo Shade of Carn Dûm Join Date: Nov 2004 Location: Curled up on Melko's lap Posts: 425	My save is finally filled. I think Dorran may be in hot water. Azhar is asking Athwen to go with her and the children..... __________________ Now Tevildo was a mighty cat--the mightiest of all--and possessed of an evil spirit,...and he was in Melko's constant following; and that cat had all cats subject to him, and he and his subjects were the chasers and getters of meat for Melko's table.

08-23-2007, 01:49 PM	#2
Nogrod Flame of the Ainulindalë Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: Wearing rat's coat, crowskin, crossed staves in a field behaving as the wind behaves Posts: 9,308	I'm so sorry I have been taken away from this the last weeks - and will be hands full of work for a few days still. Just work from early morning to over midnight every day... But I'll be back as soon as I can. Within a week I hope. Let's see how we can turn the tide... __________________ Upon the hearth the fire is red Beneath the roof there is a bed; But not yet weary are our feet...

08-30-2007, 01:37 PM	#5
Folwren Messenger of Hope Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: In a tiny, insignificant little town in one of the many States. Posts: 5,076	I liked it. I don't think it was too dramatic, either. Poor Athwen, though. Hey, Durelin, I had an idea. If Khamir really thinks as badly of Athwen as your previous post made out, it might be humorous if sometime fairly shortly, he is wounded and comes under her care. We could make something interesting of it, and you could do a great deal of interesting character development there. what do you think? -- Folwren __________________ A young man who wishes to remain a sound atheist cannot be too careful of his reading. - C.S. Lewis

08-23-2007, 10:23 PM	#3
Durelin Estelo dagnir, Melo ring Join Date: Oct 2002 Posts: 3,063	I'll do my best to get a post up very soon that brings the orcs out of the pit (they're still in the pit, right? Err...) and close to execution. But if anyone wants to do that, feel free to jump in. If you want to cover anything else before that, put a save up or let me know, or both. And then we just have to work out the 'rescue' so to speak. is excited This is great stuff!

08-30-2007, 01:17 PM	#4
Durelin Estelo dagnir, Melo ring Join Date: Oct 2002 Posts: 3,063	Forgive the double post... I have finally posted. The execution has commenced. Alright, so, my post is a little weird...I was kinda in a weird mood...it also is a little dramatic...perhaps too dramatic. Basically I have it so that the executioners are poised to kill when the Orc women and/or children come to the condemned Orcs' aid. Too dramatic? What we had in mind? Was I too vague? Just let me know. Also...do we have Orc women and children around to step in?

08-30-2007, 01:43 PM	#6
Durelin Estelo dagnir, Melo ring Join Date: Oct 2002 Posts: 3,063	Thank you. ^_^ And yes, that sounds awesome! Khamir actually holds great respect for Athwen because he's seen her work so hard to help people, so it will be a very interesting conflict when he's actually forced to confront her, and particularly in a situation where he is the one in the weaker position. I'll look out for an opportunity for that.