Beren and Lúthien - Changes needed

[Aiwendil]

Just to get this at the top: Are we still in progress?

Yes. I know it was a few weeks ago that I said I'd have more comments "in a day or so" or something like that. Things have been busier than I expected and I haven't gotten much of a chance to sit down and put things in order.

So - sorry for the unpredictability of my contributions, but I'm still here and I will have more comments up soon.