Abduction in Edoras Discussion Thread - The Barrow-Downs Discussion Forum

Firefoot · 05-11-2006, 02:40 PM

I think the only thing that I really mind is the part at the end about Scyld retreating "as quickly as possible." Him getting out of there like that is fine, but I think I'd make it a little slower, more guarded. Other than that, looks fine. Scyld is still developing for me, and I'm definitely liking this exasperation with Gurth.

05-11-2006, 02:40 PM	#11
Firefoot Illusionary Holbytla Join Date: Dec 2003 Posts: 7,547	I think the only thing that I really mind is the part at the end about Scyld retreating "as quickly as possible." Him getting out of there like that is fine, but I think I'd make it a little slower, more guarded. Other than that, looks fine. Scyld is still developing for me, and I'm definitely liking this exasperation with Gurth.