Outracing the Flames Discussion Thread - The Barrow-Downs Discussion Forum

Undómë · 04-13-2006, 02:50 PM

Arry

I've moved my previous post forward. The group has definitely left the camp now.

Arry · 04-13-2006, 02:51 PM

I'll move my SAVE forward then.

Maeggaladiel · 04-13-2006, 02:52 PM

It's possible that I may be gone all weekend, just a heads-up.

Nogrod · 04-13-2006, 03:00 PM

Arry!

I'm sorry to bother you again, but I had already written my post while all these last discussions took place - and posted it too. So I think, you should move your save one step forwards once again.

Otherwise, I see no bad discrepancies in the storyline.

PS. I had been of the opinion that we were on thew move already, but as Maeggaladiel's post stated, that he was only mounting his horse, I got puzzled, and reacted.

Let's just go forwards...

Arry · 04-13-2006, 03:03 PM

Thanks for moving us on, Undome

Posted by Undómë

Quote:

Soon the entire group had moved forward. . . . leaving the camp behind.

And as the sun rose near the mid-day position against the grey sky, the riders could see in the distance the sharp drop of the rocky cliffs as The River cut its way downward into the limestone layers.

The group is nearing where it will turn westward from the river's course and proceed toward Edoras (about two full days' ride from where the group makes the turn.)

And 'yes' there will be an incident occur - I think it will begin after this weekend since most of the writers will have Passover or Easter plans/celebrations. Whe the timing is right for the guest writer, I'll jump us forward so we'll be in place.

You might want to begin to consider now whether in this next 'incident' you want your character to continue on, or would you like him/her to die a glorious. gory death.

Nogrod · 04-13-2006, 03:14 PM

Nicely modded Arry! Thanks!

Undómë · 04-13-2006, 03:23 PM

Please note I split my post and moved part of it below Nogrod's.

As has Arry moved his SAVE again, I see.

As he said, the group is just coming up to (notes it in the distance) the area called the Sarn Gebir where the river cuts a deep channel and the cliffs rise high above it.

We should be about where the 'R' is in the 'GREAT' of GREAT RIVER

Nogrod · 04-13-2006, 03:33 PM

Undómë: That looks pretty good on the thread now. Good!

04-13-2006, 02:50 PM	#1
Undómë Shade of Carn Dûm Join Date: Mar 2005 Posts: 400	Arry I've moved my previous post forward. The group has definitely left the camp now. __________________ Young she was and yet not so. The braids of her dark hair were touched by no frost, her white arms and clear face were flawless and smooth, and the light of stars was in her bright eyes, grey as a cloudless night . . .

04-13-2006, 02:51 PM	#2
Arry Ghost Prince of Cardolan Join Date: Jan 2004 Posts: 704	I'll move my SAVE forward then. __________________ If more of us valued food and cheer and song above hoarded gold, it would be a merrier world – J.R.R. Tolkien

04-13-2006, 02:52 PM	#3
Maeggaladiel Ghost Prince of Cardolan Join Date: Mar 2004 Location: The end of the world as we know it. I feel fine, incidentally. Posts: 500	It's possible that I may be gone all weekend, just a heads-up. __________________ "Wide ne bith wel," cwaeth se the geheirde on helle hriman.

04-13-2006, 03:00 PM	#4
Nogrod Flame of the Ainulindalë Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: Wearing rat's coat, crowskin, crossed staves in a field behaving as the wind behaves Posts: 9,308	Arry! I'm sorry to bother you again, but I had already written my post while all these last discussions took place - and posted it too. So I think, you should move your save one step forwards once again. Otherwise, I see no bad discrepancies in the storyline. PS. I had been of the opinion that we were on thew move already, but as Maeggaladiel's post stated, that he was only mounting his horse, I got puzzled, and reacted. Let's just go forwards... __________________ Upon the hearth the fire is red Beneath the roof there is a bed; But not yet weary are our feet...

04-13-2006, 03:14 PM	#6
Nogrod Flame of the Ainulindalë Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: Wearing rat's coat, crowskin, crossed staves in a field behaving as the wind behaves Posts: 9,308	Nicely modded Arry! Thanks! __________________ Upon the hearth the fire is red Beneath the roof there is a bed; But not yet weary are our feet...

04-13-2006, 03:23 PM	#7
Undómë Shade of Carn Dûm Join Date: Mar 2005 Posts: 400	Please note I split my post and moved part of it below Nogrod's. As has Arry moved his SAVE again, I see. As he said, the group is just coming up to (notes it in the distance) the area called the Sarn Gebir where the river cuts a deep channel and the cliffs rise high above it. We should be about where the 'R' is in the 'GREAT' of GREAT RIVER __________________ Young she was and yet not so. The braids of her dark hair were touched by no frost, her white arms and clear face were flawless and smooth, and the light of stars was in her bright eyes, grey as a cloudless night . . .

04-13-2006, 03:33 PM	#8
Nogrod Flame of the Ainulindalë Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: Wearing rat's coat, crowskin, crossed staves in a field behaving as the wind behaves Posts: 9,308	Undómë: That looks pretty good on the thread now. Good! __________________ Upon the hearth the fire is red Beneath the roof there is a bed; But not yet weary are our feet...