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***Mithadan*** · 10-22-2000, 06:14 PM

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Re: Feedback please! Fan-fiction...

Thanks Gwaihir! Especially flattering coming from you, since your series is excellent. I'm waiting on the next installment.

Re: Length, I knew it was running long but couldn't compress it. I also tried to find logical points where it could be broken up, but that didn't work either. The next one will likely also be long, but more amenable to being cut in two (or three or four, I always knew I was a wordy _________).

Voronwe and Elendil: Legolas is living with his family with the other Sindar. Gimli? Check the story. Elrond says that there are three graves in HIS garden. One would suspect that Gimli lies in Legolas' garden.

--Mithadan--
"The Silmarils with living light
were kindled clear, and waxing bright
shone like stars that in the North
above the reek of earth leap forth." </p>

10-22-2000, 06:14 PM	#12
*Mithadan* Spirit of Mist Join Date: Jul 2000 Location: Tol Eressea Posts: 3,397	<font face="Verdana"><table><TR><TD><FONT SIZE="1" face="Verdana, Helvetica, sans-serif">Shade of Carn Dûm Posts: 251</TD><TD></TD></TR></TABLE> Re: Feedback please! Fan-fiction... Thanks Gwaihir! Especially flattering coming from you, since your series is excellent. I'm waiting on the next installment. Re: Length, I knew it was running long but couldn't compress it. I also tried to find logical points where it could be broken up, but that didn't work either. The next one will likely also be long, but more amenable to being cut in two (or three or four, I always knew I was a wordy _________). Voronwe and Elendil: Legolas is living with his family with the other Sindar. Gimli? Check the story. Elrond says that there are three graves in HIS garden. One would suspect that Gimli lies in Legolas' garden. --Mithadan-- "The Silmarils with living light were kindled clear, and waxing bright shone like stars that in the North above the reek of earth leap forth." </p> __________________ Beleriand, Beleriand, the borders of the Elven-land.