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Itinerant Songster
Join Date: Jan 2002
Location: The Edge of Faerie
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Helen, I was assuming that it was the wee hours of the night when the rangers and young ladies returned to camp; thus, Ædegard and Leafa reunite around 2 a.m., and then it's a few hours of sleep for everyone. Mellonin's conversation with Ravion regarding parents' blessing could still be in the morning, but we need a clear cut break between the previous night and the new morning.
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Stormdancer of Doom
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Whups, I thought ... er... nevermind. I'll just change it to dark. It'll be better for the flow if Erebemlin can rally thr troops and get us all going just as the sun is rising anyway.
Guess I should bring Nethwador (and Taitheneb) straggling back to camp... whicvh means editing a few posts back. Off I go.
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Speaker of the Dead
Join Date: Oct 2002
Location: Superbia
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I've just posted, and, Helen, let me know if there's something you'd like me to change. It's kind of different from what we had discussed concerning Ravion and Mellonin, but given the shape that the story has taken, I found this turn of events more in line with Ravion's character. However, if you'd prefer something different, just tell me.
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Stormdancer of Doom
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Orual, I like it, and it works so far.
I've given Minas Tirith some thought lately. ONe option for the future is that Mellonin and Mellondu will actually return to Minas Tirith-- perhaps with stubborn Erebemlin attending Mellondu's every move? Mellondu will discuss it with his father, who will ask him: Quote:
Some characters we may have to carry as best we can, if folk get busy. We obviously won't finish the game by Spring... but I hope it doesn't drag ion indeterminably. Thoughts? Reactions? Opinions? Horses: Erebemlin & Taitheneb have their own Nethwador has Celegoer Mellondu has Echo Liornung, Ædegard, & Argeleafa & Bella each have their own Ravion has Gond. That leaves, on foot or riding behind: Aeron Erundil Raefindan Edit: pray that I have time to fuss at the timeline & the map shortly... I think (with weary horses, especially some folk riding double) we should probably "slow down" to 30 miles a day... right now we are just south of the Entwash, true? I think we are maybe 100 miles from Minas Tirith. Let's call it three long or four short days travel. I should think everyone would go to Minas Tirith, or at least near; some need medicine, some need R&R. We can all be suitably annoyed when Mellondu sets out at dawn the day after he comes home..... Maybe we catch up with Ravion as he wanders morosely southwards?
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Stormdancer of Doom
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roll call
Er, anybody here?
Anyone who wants to can write up the departure from camp. Erebemlin & Taitheneb are leading the group sort of by default; but Erebemlin, I think, will be glued to Mellondu's side, and who knows what the group will do when we get to Minas Tirith. But that's three or four days' travel hence. Let's get there.
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Itinerant Songster
Join Date: Jan 2002
Location: The Edge of Faerie
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Sorry for dropping the ball. I'll try and put up a post this afternoon (Tuesday); can't promise though.
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The Melody of Misery
Join Date: Aug 2002
Location: The Island of Conclusions (You get there by jumping!)...
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If I don't totally collapse of exhaustion after my homework tonight, I'll get a post up tonight. If not tonight, definitely tomorrow afternoon.
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