Fall of Doriath - Outlaws in Menegroth

[Aiwendil]

RD-SL-10

Perhaps you can propose something that will do the trick.

I would simply delete this part, thus:

RD-SL-10<TN and none may say what was {his} theirunhappy weird thereafter{; and little but a tortured heart got he from the Gold of Glorund}.>

RD-EX-21

I rather like the The Necklace of the Dwarves, ‘Sigil Elu-neath’ Necklace of the Woe of Thingol. I would rather keep it unless there is an overriding reason that we should not.

I think we should try to stick to Tolkien's intended chapter breaks. There is some possibility that he would have considered "Wanderings" a separate tale from "Sigil Elu-naeth", but I don't think there's any hard evidence for that.

RD-EX-27

Actually it comes from Annals of Aman

Ah. Still, it was never intended for use here. I am inclined now toward my proposal:

for RD-EX-27 {the fathers of the Rodothlim} [the people of Finarfin] had brought with them out of Valinor a portion of that boundless treasury the {Noldoli}[Noldor] had there possessed.>

[Maédhros]

I think we should try to stick to Tolkien's intended chapter breaks. There is some possibility that he would have considered "Wanderings" a separate tale from "Sigil Elu-naeth", but I don't think there's any hard evidence for that.

But didn't we use subtitles in our Eärendil chapter?

for RD-EX-27 {the fathers of the Rodothlim} [the people of Finarfin] had brought with them out of Valinor a portion of that boundless treasury the {Noldoli}[Noldor] had there possessed.>

It is basically the same thing, so we will have to wait what Findegil thinks about it.

I think that basically we are done with this part too.