*Feanor,Turin and the Second Prophecy of Mandos*

[Findegil]

Okay, it is eacxtly what I feared, you would not only like to make the content of Prophecy dubious but also the fact that it was uttered at all. But I still think we should use the first sentece for that an rebulid it to give the meaning we want:
Forum formated:

VE-21 The Second Prophecy of Mandos
A <BT rumour{ of his words} was whispered among all the {Elves}[Men] of the West>, that{Thus spake} Mandos [spoke this words ]in prophecy, when the Gods sat in judgement in Valinor{, and the rumour of his words was whispered among all the Elves of the West}. When the world is old and the Powers grow weary, ...

Plain text:

VE-21 The Second Prophecy of Mandos
A rumour was whispered among all the Men of the West, that Mandos spoke this words in prophecy, when the Gods sat in judgement in Valinor. When the world is old and the Powers grow weary, ...

Does that do the trick?

Respectfully
Findegil