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| View Poll Results: What do you think about the principle of 'ReVersing' | |||
| Great! Keep it up! The poetry of the kind has an independent value, it deserves a book all to itself! |
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| Good! It is re-creative in a sense it lives opon other’s work, but good application of one’s creative abilities nevertheless. Just don’t expect much from it |
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| Indifferent. Really, it’s desultory. Have fun if you like, I don’t care, but stop forcing your megalomaniac ramblings on me! |
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| Horrible! How dared you to deal with Tolkien in such an insulting way! Don’t even think about ReVersing another piece of rhyme! |
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Deadnight Chanter
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Bilbo's Eärendil song
The verse to follow is not exact reverse (for than it would be very difficult to retain any meaning at all). But it follows in metrics and, I hope, spirit, though tells quite a different story, and in that, I hope, is a reverse of an original.
As always, original provided in italics **************************** Eärendil was a mariner that tarried in Arvernien; he built a boat of timber felled in Nimbrethil to journey in; her sails he wove of silver fair, of silver were her lanterns made, her prow was fashioned like a swan, and light upon her banners laid. In panoply of ancient kings, in chainéd rings he armoured him; his shining shield was scored with runes to ward all wounds and harm from him; his bow was made of dragon-horn, his arrows shorn of ebony, of silver was his habergeon, his scabbard of chalcedony; his sword of steel was valiant, of adamant his helmet tall, an eagle-plume upon his crest, upon his breast an emerald. Beneath the Moon and under star he wandered far from northern strands, bewildered on enchanted ways beyond the days of mortal lands. From gnashing of the Narrow Ice where shadow lies on frozen hills, from nether heats and burning waste he turned in haste, and roving still on starless waters far astray at last he came to Night of Naught, and passed, and never sight he saw of shining shore nor light he sought. The winds of wrath came driving him, and blindly in the foam he fled from west to east and errandless, unheralded he homeward sped. There flying Elwing came to him, and flame was in the darkness lit; more bright than light of diamond the fire upon her carcanet. The Silmaril she bound on him and crowned him with the living light and dauntless then with burning brow he turned his prow; and in the night from Otherworld beyond the Sea there strong and free a storm arose, a wind of power in Tarmenel; by paths that seldom mortal goes his boat it bore with biting breath as might of death across the grey and long-forsaken seas distressed: from east to west he passed away. Through Evernight he back was borne on black and roaring waves that ran o'er leagues unlit and foundered shores that drowned before the Days began, until he heard on strands of pearl when ends the world the music long, where ever foaming billows roll the yellow gold and jewels wan. He saw the Mountain silent rise where twilight lies upon the knees of Valinor, and Eldamar beheld afar beyond the seas. A wanderer escaped from night to haven white he came at last, to Elvenhome the green and fair where keen the air, where pale as glass beneath the Hill of Ilmarin a-glimmer in a valley sheer the lamplit towers of Tirion are mirrored on the Shadowmere. He tarried there from errantry, and melodies they taught to him, and sages old him marvels told, and harps of gold they brought to him. They clothed him then in elven-white, and seven lights before him sent, as through the Calacirian to hidden land forlorn he went. He came unto the timeless halls where shining fall the countless years, and endless reigns the Elder King in Ilmarin on Mountain sheer; and words unheard were spoken then of folk of Men and Elven-kin, beyond the world were visions showed forbid to those that dwell therein. A ship then new they built for him of mithril and of elven-glass with shining prow; no shaven oar nor sail she bore on silver mast: the Silmaril as lantern light and banner bright with living flame to gleam thereon by Elbereth herself was set, who thither came and wings immortal made for him, and laid on him undying doom, to sail the shoreless skies and come behind the Sun and light of Moon. From Evereven's lofty hills where softly silver fountains fall his wings him bore, a wandering light, beyond the mighty Mountain Wall. From World's End then he turned away and yearned again to find afar his home through shadows journeying, and burning as an island star on high above the mists he came, a distant flame before the Sun, a wonder ere the waking dawn where grey the Norland waters run. And over Middle-earth he passed and heard at last the weeping sore of women and of elven-maids in Elder Days, in years of yore. gut on him mighty doom was laid, till Moon should fade, an orb‚d star to pass, and tarry never more on Hither Shores where mortals are; for ever still a herald on an errand that should never rest to bear his shining lamp afar, the Flammifer of Westernesse. ******************************* Ugluk the Strong, on foot he journeyed And hurried through Calenardhon He’d hewn some heads of those who yearned No rest for weary, push them on His blade was made of cruel steel Of copper was its hideous hilt With leather boot and nailed heel Suppressed he all the cheek and tilt His many score of goblin-men In plates of black and leather bound’ With crooked pikes from mountain den Were keen of eye with scent of hounds Their arms so strong, and pacing stead Their razor claws and teeth of beast Their strengh of feet on man-flash fed Brought halflings to the West from East Their blackened blades, and eyed shields Of no avail they proved though For quicker’s horse on open field And arrow shot of wooden bow Though orks them be, yet under Sun On route so short they took to flight Be clear their goal, and free their run But none returned to the heights Between the meadows and the wood Where brightly shone fair Arien They met their death, none raven food In smoke and fire their pride was riven For night they longed, but none shall come For those to set their foot on grass Of horse-lords’ land of starry dome And running waters sprinkling-glass The will of wizard pushed them on But swift and keen were Riders’ eyes So none came out with the dawn And woody grove for no ork sighs Though Mahaur and host of lads Be there to help Ugluk with arms Though stout them be and strong their hands They had not luck and brought no harm Grishnakh there was, one fallen soul The Ring to seize, to claim, to win With arms of might, with breath of foul To drag his prey to forest dim Yet cunning mind and skilful word And arrow swift by chance onbrought Have saved halflings from his sword The path of fate anew was wrought Their feet it took to wander free To wood of old, of life and might There two met third, and all them three Were soon away, out of ear and sight Through tangled branch, o’er twisted root Under brooding dark malicious thought O’er leagues of rotten leaf and soot Of killed trees them Treebeard brought To meet the chiefs of mighty race The treeherds strong and green of eyes To hark the speech of lazy pace To witness mighty anger rise They’ve seen the Ents who marched forth They’ve seen the Huorns who creep unheed And treeherds going forth to war Avenging twig and leaf and seed Their foe be strong, his walls be high And circle of stone be mighty hewn His skill be spell, his end was nigh For noisy river ents have sewn And Cunning Mind was doomed to fail As goblin-men by forest lay Of stony circle defence was frail And might of tree’s not kept at bay Avenged be now yew and pine And rowan, birch and oak tall And sage no more, with coward’s whine Had paid of broken staff the toll His former clothing, elven-white Was took by worthy one at last Nan-Curunir, it’s tower’s height Was freed from malice strong and fast No foes to come to Rohan’s field No sullen ork or goblin-man No wives to weep o’er broken shield No child be took to ogre’s den No cunning words, and crooked lies To poison Rider’s ear and heart And mortal circle where man’s path lies Was freed from dark and cunning art New garden round tower was laid By skill of treehedrs wise of age New life to sprout, new forest maid To flourish where barren cage Of metal wheels and cogs of steel Was built to wound groaning earth No cage is left, mo metal wheel So came to ruin power-dearth Of one once great, of angel white Of wisdom old for Ring which craved Not he himself, bereft of might Gone forth he found there no grave From Orthank’s mighty jagged fang Where black and strong the wall stood still The wizard forced, heart-piercing tang To seek new path in night of chill But halflings, those to stir the wrath Of brooding forest silence grim Went back to warmth and fire of hearth In darkling tunnel grey and dim To smoked rings of pipe-weed ripe To feast on ruins plunder wrougt To greet their friends with glass and pipe And merry be with what fate brought But Cunning Mind o’er westlands passed To be from now hole-dwellers’s foe And land of Shire to make a-messed To bring on calm-folk soring woe To fell the trees and burn anew And bring the ruin to every home To smash with skill, but build askew Replace with shack the hall and dome But failed goal, for slave him slayed One hungry, wretched, venom-fraught Once mighty spirit soulless stayed And western breeze brought him to naught
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