Friends of Nimrodel: Tapestry of Dreams - Discussion - The Barrow-Downs Discussion Forum

littlemanpoet · 05-10-2004, 01:44 PM

Orual, that was a work of genius! Way to go!

alaklondewen · 05-10-2004, 02:03 PM

lmp, there is a small problem with your Lorien post. Caranduin and Celegtâl know nothing of Amroth and Mellon, but they will take you to Erebemlin anyway. I probably should have been clearer beforehand, but would you mind editing that dialogue? Thanks.

Edit: Also, Celegtâl is standing before you, while Caranduin is in the tree.

mark12_30 · 05-10-2004, 02:27 PM

Okay! Fingon hath spoken-- and Mellonin is a sqeaky-voiced bundle of frayed nerves!!

Imladris · 05-10-2004, 02:35 PM

Good old Aeron showing some sort of nobility at the end.

Nice touch...

littlemanpoet · 05-10-2004, 07:46 PM

Oops, and thanks, Alak. Will fix.

mark12_30 · 05-11-2004, 11:09 AM

Okay, team, I'm Stumped. Suggestions?? Brainstorms??

Imladris · 05-11-2004, 02:12 PM

I edited post 200 for more chaacter developement....

As for brainstorms, whatever happened to the dragon idea? Maybe we'll still have merchants to deal with as well...*evil Calvin grin*

05-10-2004, 01:44 PM	#1
littlemanpoet Itinerant Songster Join Date: Jan 2002 Location: The Edge of Faerie Posts: 7,066	genius! Orual, that was a work of genius! Way to go!

05-10-2004, 02:03 PM	#2
alaklondewen Song of Seregon Join Date: Feb 2002 Location: Following the road less traveled Posts: 1,193	lmp, there is a small problem with your Lorien post. Caranduin and Celegtâl know nothing of Amroth and Mellon, but they will take you to Erebemlin anyway. I probably should have been clearer beforehand, but would you mind editing that dialogue? Thanks. Edit: Also, Celegtâl is standing before you, while Caranduin is in the tree. __________________ At last I understand why we have waited! This is the ending. Now not day only shall be beloved, but night too shall be beautiful and blessed and all its fear pass away!

05-10-2004, 02:27 PM	#3
mark12_30 Stormdancer of Doom Join Date: Jan 2002 Location: Elvish singing is not a thing to miss, in June under the stars Posts: 4,349	it's rough, lengthy and -- well, you decide Okay! Fingon hath spoken-- and Mellonin is a sqeaky-voiced bundle of frayed nerves!! __________________ ...down to the water to see the elves dance and sing upon the midsummer's eve.

05-10-2004, 02:35 PM	#4
Imladris Tears of the Phoenix Join Date: Jun 2003 Location: Putting dimes in the jukebox baby. Posts: 1,453	Good old Aeron showing some sort of nobility at the end. Nice touch... __________________ I'm sorry it wasn't a unicorn. It would have been nice to have unicorns. I'm your huckleberry.

05-10-2004, 07:46 PM	#5
littlemanpoet Itinerant Songster Join Date: Jan 2002 Location: The Edge of Faerie Posts: 7,066	oops! Oops, and thanks, Alak. Will fix.

05-11-2004, 11:09 AM	#6
mark12_30 Stormdancer of Doom Join Date: Jan 2002 Location: Elvish singing is not a thing to miss, in June under the stars Posts: 4,349	Okay, team, I'm Stumped. Suggestions?? Brainstorms?? __________________ ...down to the water to see the elves dance and sing upon the midsummer's eve.

05-11-2004, 02:12 PM	#7
Imladris Tears of the Phoenix Join Date: Jun 2003 Location: Putting dimes in the jukebox baby. Posts: 1,453	I edited post 200 for more chaacter developement.... As for brainstorms, whatever happened to the dragon idea? Maybe we'll still have merchants to deal with as well...evil Calvin grin __________________ I'm sorry it wasn't a unicorn. It would have been nice to have unicorns. I'm your huckleberry.