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littlemanpoet · 04-03-2004, 12:53 PM

Thanks for posting Raefindan, Helen!

Just a few verrrrry minor quibbles (if you feel like fixing them fine but don't feel obligated):

Raefindan would speak in contractions: don't, I'm, we're, can't, etc.

His vocal filler would be a silent pause instead of "ah" - and if you can find a place where I've used vocal filler besides silence, prove me wrong and I'll just blush.

Instead of Good sir, he'd say "sir"

The last couple of questions were great! I could not have done any better. Verrrrry nice touch.

04-03-2004, 12:53 PM	#11
littlemanpoet Itinerant Songster Join Date: Jan 2002 Location: The Edge of Faerie Posts: 7,066	Raefindan's voice Thanks for posting Raefindan, Helen! Just a few verrrrry minor quibbles (if you feel like fixing them fine but don't feel obligated): Raefindan would speak in contractions: don't, I'm, we're, can't, etc. His vocal filler would be a silent pause instead of "ah" - and if you can find a place where I've used vocal filler besides silence, prove me wrong and I'll just blush. Instead of Good sir, he'd say "sir" The last couple of questions were great! I could not have done any better. Verrrrry nice touch.