Bloodstained Elanor Planning/Discussion Thread - The Barrow-Downs Discussion Forum

Roa_Aoife · 03-16-2004, 03:10 PM

Again, I'm with Fordhim on this one. The extra guards not only add further, adnperhaps too much, complexity, they also remove some of the urgency from the story. Already we have four groups:

Lorien Envoy
Mirkwood scouting party
Main force of badies
Elite Easterlings and Orcs

If you really desire a fifth point of view, surely ther are some non-warriors in Lorien. We could have brief looks from them about the waiting they must endure. They could also give a look at the mou nting tension in Lorien, as well as shock when the surprise force shows up.

03-16-2004, 03:10 PM	#11
Roa_Aoife Ghost Prince of Cardolan Join Date: Feb 2004 Location: Someday, I'll rule all of it. Posts: 1,696	Again, I'm with Fordhim on this one. The extra guards not only add further, adnperhaps too much, complexity, they also remove some of the urgency from the story. Already we have four groups: Lorien Envoy Mirkwood scouting party Main force of badies Elite Easterlings and Orcs If you really desire a fifth point of view, surely ther are some non-warriors in Lorien. We could have brief looks from them about the waiting they must endure. They could also give a look at the mou nting tension in Lorien, as well as shock when the surprise force shows up. __________________ We can't all be Roas* when it comes to analysing...* -Lommy I didn't say you're evil, Roa, I said you're exasperating. -Nerwen