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Cryptic Aura
Join Date: May 2002
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Hi Inkling,
Thanks for trying. [img]smilies/smile.gif[/img] I've played around with it myself. I also cannot get the caesura to space properly, so I've marked it by a double slash. This way, the stress of each line shows. I hope this helps. Here's the poem: Wilt thou learn the lore // that was long secret of the Five that came // from a far country? One only returned. // Others never again under Men's dominion // Middle-earth shall seek until Dagor Dagorath // and the Doom cometh. How hast thou heard it: // the hidden counsel of the Lord's of the West // in the land of Aman? The long roads are lost // that led tither, and to mortal Men // Manwe speaks not. From the West-that-was // a wind bore it to the sleeper's ear, // in the silences under night-shadow, // when news is brought from lands forgotten // and lost ages over seas of years // to the searching thought. Not all are forgotten // by the Elder King. Sauron he saw // a slow menace.... Bethberry
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