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Stormdancer of Doom
Join Date: Jan 2002
Location: Elvish singing is not a thing to miss, in June under the stars
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Dear Stone of Vision,
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I have a few questions that I think are just translation-kinds of issues. English grammar. Maybe if you could clarify them for me? "rightful"-- I'm not sure what you mean by this. Righteous maybe? What is it that the speaker is trying to say there? I think *of* should be *that*, here, does that sound right? Just the feeling *of* something bad is happening Also I think "anguish resonates" would work better... English, again... how does that sound to you? But hey, ***IT'S GOOD**... [ June 17, 2002: Message edited by: mark12_30 ]
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