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Child of the 7th Age · 12-14-2002, 06:16 PM

Thanks for letting Cami rail.

Also, you'll want to back up on the thread. There's a new post Helen did on the 'hobbits in chains' theme. Quite humorous in a grim way. Plus, I revised my 'locked in the cabin post' to make it grimmer yet.

I think we are best treating the 'chains' as part of the story line. It is interwoven in too many of the posts to take it out with a knife.

It is even possible that the characters of both Cami and Pio will learn something new about themselves through this dialogue.

Perhaps, the easiest way to do it is this. Cami writes a letter to Pio outlining her anger and concerns (a condensed version of what's on the discussion thread). Then Pio comes to see Cami and talk( in a separate post). Would this work?

I will probably not get the letter up till tomorrow afternoon. Weekends are crammed.

Cami also has to talk to Gamba, if she doesn't kill him first.

sharon

12-14-2002, 06:16 PM	#11
Child of the 7th Age Spirit of the Lonely Star Join Date: Mar 2002 Posts: 5,133	Thanks for letting Cami rail. Also, you'll want to back up on the thread. There's a new post Helen did on the 'hobbits in chains' theme. Quite humorous in a grim way. Plus, I revised my 'locked in the cabin post' to make it grimmer yet. I think we are best treating the 'chains' as part of the story line. It is interwoven in too many of the posts to take it out with a knife. It is even possible that the characters of both Cami and Pio will learn something new about themselves through this dialogue. Perhaps, the easiest way to do it is this. Cami writes a letter to Pio outlining her anger and concerns (a condensed version of what's on the discussion thread). Then Pio comes to see Cami and talk( in a separate post). Would this work? I will probably not get the letter up till tomorrow afternoon. Weekends are crammed. Cami also has to talk to Gamba, if she doesn't kill him first. sharon __________________ Multitasking women are never too busy to vote.