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piosenniel · 10-30-2002, 05:20 PM

I hate to be picky, but . . . how would the imprisoned hobbits have unlocked themselves from their cells? Daisy is in an isolation cell - not one you can reach through the bars and gain access to the lock.(I think it was described that way earlier in the storyline). It only has that small access at the base of it to push food through.

I could have her pass the key out to Kali or Pio. Then she and Kali could unlock the others while Mith and Pio fend off the guards. I think by this time the possibility of sneaking up on the guards with the knives is gone. Anee should go with Kali,Daisy, Gamba, Azraph back to defend the main cave. I can also write that in.

NOTE:

Have edited the rescue post, Daisy passes the key out to Pio. Anee is there. The knives are passed out in a later post, when Bird and her rescued group meet the Locks party.

[ October 30, 2002: Message edited by: piosenniel ]

10-30-2002, 05:20 PM	#11
piosenniel Desultory Dwimmerlaik Join Date: Mar 2002 Location: Pickin' flowers with Bill the Cat..... Posts: 7,779	I hate to be picky, but . . . how would the imprisoned hobbits have unlocked themselves from their cells? Daisy is in an isolation cell - not one you can reach through the bars and gain access to the lock.(I think it was described that way earlier in the storyline). It only has that small access at the base of it to push food through. I could have her pass the key out to Kali or Pio. Then she and Kali could unlock the others while Mith and Pio fend off the guards. I think by this time the possibility of sneaking up on the guards with the knives is gone. Anee should go with Kali,Daisy, Gamba, Azraph back to defend the main cave. I can also write that in. NOTE: Have edited the rescue post, Daisy passes the key out to Pio. Anee is there. The knives are passed out in a later post, when Bird and her rescued group meet the Locks party. [ October 30, 2002: Message edited by: piosenniel ] __________________ Eldest, that’s what I am . . . I knew the dark under the stars when it was fearless - before the Dark Lord came from Outside.