Experimental Planning Thread: The Princess Guard - The Barrow-Downs Discussion Forum

Child of the 7th Age · 05-30-2003, 01:00 PM

Lyra,

Still needs a bit of editing, but looking very good. Your character sounds like a real person with foibles and strong points.

Lyra, would you do a favor for me. Break down your post into more than three paragraphs. I have trouble reading such large blocks of print.

Cami readjusts her spectacles and strains her eyes.....

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Everyone:

I have one suggestion. In order to keep things clear for the other Shirelings who'll join the game later (and for the Mods who are sometimes notoriously dense!), could you stick in a little sentence somewhere in the profile stating which group the character belongs to: A. Finduillas and her immediate circle. B. Women of Ecthelion's court C. What shall we call these nasties?

The character list is arranged in these three groups so it might be helpful if the profiles gave an indication of that as well.

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Hey, you are all doing a great job here!

05-30-2003, 01:00 PM	#11
Child of the 7th Age Spirit of the Lonely Star Join Date: Mar 2002 Posts: 5,133	Lyra, Still needs a bit of editing, but looking very good. Your character sounds like a real person with foibles and strong points. Lyra, would you do a favor for me. Break down your post into more than three paragraphs. I have trouble reading such large blocks of print. Cami readjusts her spectacles and strains her eyes..... ******************************************* Everyone: I have one suggestion. In order to keep things clear for the other Shirelings who'll join the game later (and for the Mods who are sometimes notoriously dense!), could you stick in a little sentence somewhere in the profile stating which group the character belongs to: A. Finduillas and her immediate circle. B. Women of Ecthelion's court C. What shall we call these nasties? The character list is arranged in these three groups so it might be helpful if the profiles gave an indication of that as well. **************************************** Hey, you are all doing a great** job here! __________________ Multitasking women are never too busy to vote.