The Fall of Greenwood the Great Discussion Thread

[maikafanawen]

Everdawn: If you could put Ainemetion's death in your post I would be MUCH abliged! Also, I love the last paragraph between Arie and her father! That looks very good.

When at last they came, no cheer was uttered to them, nor words of thanks for their pain....

I see a great feast in their honor with much praise and thanks. I see loved ones running out to great them and tears of happiness being shed. This seems like a more cheery ending for such a dramatic story, yes? Of course I grant that many a sob will heave for the loss of heroes such as Airelome, Gilbereth, and Ainemetion, and for the state of the rescued Succumbed. But all in all, I think the survivors should be given a heroic welcome.

Arien: Don't forget to have Ceros explain their journey to Thranduil.

I'm weaving a post that wraps up their journey home right now. It should be up in about 20 min.

-Maikafanawen