ROHAN DISCUSSION

[Thenamir]

One last nit-pick, Rim:

Thenamir followed his new guide Volkmar who moved with a speed and stealth which belied an obviously lame and stiff-braced leg.

I apologize if one of my previous posts was ambiguous, but Thenamir is not favoring his left leg -- that is, any more than he is favoring the rest of his sore and slightly scorched person. I was referring in that post to Volkmar, whose backstory indicated that his leg was injured sometime before and was permanently braced.

Volkmer's left leg did not heal right. Despite the brace, he still walks with a limp. Running is much harder and more painful.

Just thought I'd clear that up. Other than that, the revision looks good!

Thenamir of Rohan
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