A Ride to the Dark Side--Discussion Thread

[Estel the Descender]

Hello Gryphon Hall,

Thank you once again for your interest in one of my characters, and I love the way you handled their first meeting. Corrin wasn't driving a cart, though. He was running. He left most of his belongings in his room in The White Horse and his cart parked in front, hopefully to be taken care of by the inn-keeper Bethberry.

[img]smilies/rolleyes.gif[/img] Ok-ay. . . I'm editing the first and last paragraphs of the second part of my post:

After eating his breakfast, Béowulf rearmed himself and mounted Léod and started to ride down Edoras. He was delayed from going out the gate, however, when a dwarf suddenly cut in front of Léod.

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Both rider and dwarf went out the gates and turned east after passing by the barrows and crossing the Snowbourne Bridge, following the path of the Snowbourne. The Rider rode while the dwarf ran.

I hope this would do. [img]smilies/biggrin.gif[/img]

[ January 03, 2003: Message edited by: Estel the Descender ]