Last Hope for Moria Discussion Thread - The Barrow-Downs Discussion Forum

Amanaduial the archer · 01-02-2004, 04:50 PM

Carlas - accepted then
Mercy of the Valar - lovely, Imladris and myself both like your profile and post. Welcome [img]smilies/smile.gif[/img]
Gird - Your profile is fine, and I like it, but the first post is, as you said, rushed. I know you said to judge it on your other writing, but as you haven't played in any other Downs games and the Green Dragon isn't a formal RPG (although I have been impressed with your writing there), I can't really do that. Could I ask you to expand on your post, and to make it less modern (please avoid 'uh' and 'wow')? The profile is fine, but the post maybe needs some re-doing. [img]smilies/smile.gif[/img]

Thanks!

-Aman

01-02-2004, 04:50 PM	#11
Amanaduial the archer Shadow of Starlight Join Date: Mar 2002 Location: dancing among the ledgerlines... Posts: 2,347	Carlas - accepted then Mercy of the Valar - lovely, Imladris and myself both like your profile and post. Welcome [img]smilies/smile.gif[/img] Gird - Your profile is fine, and I like it, but the first post is, as you said, rushed. I know you said to judge it on your other writing, but as you haven't played in any other Downs games and the Green Dragon isn't a formal RPG (although I have been impressed with your writing there), I can't really do that. Could I ask you to expand on your post, and to make it less modern (please avoid 'uh' and 'wow')? The profile is fine, but the post maybe needs some re-doing. [img]smilies/smile.gif[/img] Thanks! -Aman __________________ I am what I was, a harmless little devil