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Mnemo: that was very good indeed! And I don't think we need to change anything timewise either - one or two posts on both sides of the night shouldn't be a problem.
Foley: you're quite right, lord Athanar would not let Thornden go as he needs him - but he would probably be okay with the messengers stopping by at Garreth's. Adding more twists to the mess... well surely! Go on lmp!
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Itinerant Songster
Join Date: Jan 2002
Location: The Edge of Faerie
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Thornden staying - fixed. I'm glad you were okay with the "you stink" part. Guys will talk like that to their friends.
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Estelo dagnir, Melo ring
Join Date: Oct 2002
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So I posted a sort of general reflection/catch up post for Coen.
As for him finding out about Thornden hiding something...well, he suspected Thornden at least of wanting to protect Erbrand (and Lithor), but he had a fairly high opinion of Thornden at first so doesn't really want to think he's hiding something very specific, other than that he has a lot of sympathy for the two and thinks they have been mistreated. Which is enough to make Coen angry! I suppose he does suspect him hiding something, though he doesn't want to. Apparently he's a strange combination of idealistic and bitter. Or rather he decides what he thinks about someone within a couple moments interaction and then it takes him months or years to change that image of someone even if it's wrong. Anyway I'm rambling. So if Hilderinc or someone else spoke to Coen about it and got his suspicions going...well, if it was Hilderinc he might go straight to Athanar cause he trusts him so much. If it was someone else he doesn't trust as much, he'd go confront Thornden. But he also might feel he needs to confront Thornden and make *him* tell Athanar. Kind of like dragging a kid who's done something bad to apologize. Er...anyway...I guess those are my thoughts. I see that you wanted to try to fit the reveal in possibly to the dinner the previous evening... I suppose Hilderinc could find Coen in the stables and inform him? That is if you both want to go through with that. It is up to you, Legate and Foley. Or we can hold off and keep building whatever tensions... |
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Messenger of Hope
Join Date: Jun 2005
Location: In a tiny, insignificant little town in one of the many States.
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Durelin, I'm so excited that you came and posted! Your post was really good. I like Coenred a lot.
It makes little difference that Coen and Hilderinc didn't talk the previous night. It can happen whenever. It happening this morning would be fine, or later. Legate, what do you think? I wish I could post something tonight, but I can't. Besides that, I don't even know what I'd post about. Maybe Thornden asking Athanar if the messengers can stop by Garreth's smithy, but we've already said that'd be fine here on the discussion thread so I thought that maybe would be superfluous. But if others think not, maybe I'll post that. I dunno. Anyway, I'll see about things in the morning. G'night, all. -- Foley
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Nice posts!
But I noticed a problem... Looking at the situation, lord Athanar would have wished to send the messengers to Edoras asap, meaning sending them into the back of the night (which I indeed wrote there in the thread), but now it seems people are asking about who goes and where in the morning! The whole idea was that the messengers should go as soon as possible. What kind of a lord is that which gives the outlaws 12 more hours head-start? Quote:
It's a kind of a logic issue. If Athanar says in the evening "let them come here in one and half hour" - and we start to think who they are and what they would do the next morning... EDIT: I thought of writing a short post for Athanar but will now withold it for a moment until you answer to my proposal so as not to write anything I'd need to edit heavily afterwards...
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Messenger of Hope
Join Date: Jun 2005
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Oooh. I missed that. For some reason I though tthey were leaving the next morning. Okay. Should I just delete my post, as it's set in the morning? It'd be just as easy to write a whole new one as rewrite this one.
-- Foley
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Join Date: Nov 2006
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But it really looks like you all did a wonderful job here, and I like all the posts, and looking forward to see what comes further
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Illusionary Holbytla
Join Date: Dec 2003
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For clarification - are the Scarburg folk riding out to the homesteads of the local lords, or are the local lords coming to Scarburg again? I feel like I missed something.
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A Voice That Gainsayeth
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And I have posted, seems at last it is out. Dury, let me know if I have handled Coen incorrectly, or if you want me to edit in some way his words - I wanted to post only as much as I needed to keep the conversation running the way it should. I have ended my post with the assumption that Coen will also figure out what had happened (or at least part of it, that is, that Hilderinc saw either Lithor or Erbrand or both riding away), and I made Hilderinc realise it himself too (as I wrote it, I thought that it seemed logical, it would be pretty dumb of Hilderinc not to realise at least the basic possibility). If there is a different way you want the things to unfold, or, more like if Coen reacts in some unusual way or does not react at all, I can edit the ending... That said, I think it is not so bad yet, and in fact, the subject is already outdated, but this is upon Coen to handle now...
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I'll try to make a post today... not to send us riding as yet, but to continue preparations...
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