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05-07-2002, 10:34 AM | #1 |
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Middle Earth come to life
Reading The Two Towers again I was astounded this time at Tolkien's use of words.
His description of the marshes below the Emyn Muil is "livid festering marshes". We would normally think of "livid festering wounds". Thus Middle Earth is alive and wounded. I was tempted to do a 'for the fun of it' research project on my own, but thought I'd spread the fun. Has anybody else found other examples? [ May 07, 2002: Message edited by: littlemanpoet ] |
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Before I go rereading all of LotR, you are asking not just for examples of good descriptions of middle earth but specifically for descriptions of middle earth that suggest it is a living entity as in the Gaia theory? Any use of imagery appropriate to describe a body? Ok. Hmm.
Well, there's Carcaras, he's alive, and none too nice, either. Do you think your exemplar image is tied to the marshes as an 'individual' wounded body, and not all of middle earth, just as Carcaras the cruel is an individual mountain? Or is all of middle earth the wounded body? Rohan stands out in my mind as an important landscape, but I don't remember any body imagery, just a lovely green panoramic view with wind. I can still see every blade of grass leaning sideways with the morning light behind it. Definitely no wounding of Rohan. The brown lands are dead-- home of the entwives, sniff! As the ground before the Morannon is dead -- or if you want middle earth to be one body, they're both gangrened, slowly poisoning the rest. Of course, Mt. Doom and the surrounding fissures are gaping wounds, still bleeding fire. I think I remember the RotK mentioning rents and wounds in that context, and twisting-- no bleeding fire, though it does seem appropriate now that I think of it. When I reread the books recently the plight of the thorns almost made me cry-- desperately trying to drag a twisted life out of the barren rock and acrid air-- hang on, I'll go get the quote. Quote:
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i haven't looked for specific examples, but it seems the trees stand out as living beings - some even sentient, or near sentient
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The examples don't have to be limited to "Middle Earth alive". If you run across an astounding description that serves as an example of Tolkien's wordsmithying, that's the kind of thing I'm looking for. I want to open it up for an appreciation kind of tone.
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05-08-2002, 10:53 AM | #5 | |
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Oooo, I just came across this one last night while re-reading The Two Towers...
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05-08-2002, 04:15 PM | #6 |
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I know. Our homeland is beautiful, isn't it? [img]smilies/biggrin.gif[/img]
No really...Tolkien didn't exactly flatter the place. Too bad, I've always thought deserts very pretty... Anyway. I suppose the forests could be a beard, and the mountains pimples on the landscape. ^^ |
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You raise good thought provoking questions, Nar, as can of course be expected. I was in haste when I answered your reply the first time, and did not do it justice. I'll try again.
I hesitate to go so far as labeling what Tolkien is doing as using or evoking a 'Gaia' notion (or theory). I think any use of imagery that bodily personifies middle earth is what I'm talking about. I appreciate your ideas on Caradhras (Carcaras?). Yes, the marshes could be an individual wounded body, too, as Caradhras is an individual mountain with his own personality. Here's another one regarding the Emyn Muil: the hills' "broken feet". JRRT could have written something more prosaic and cliche such as "boulder strewn" or "rugged terrain", but he finds a way to give the hills personality, albeit maimed. To quote your quote: Quote:
Thanks, Tigerlilly, for that quote. I remember it well. I'll be glad, piosenniel, to get to Ithilien - maybe those trees will come to life - almost as in Fangorn... [img]smilies/wink.gif[/img] Second Nazgul, thanks for the pimples and beard. Reminds me of my own face... [img]smilies/biggrin.gif[/img] |
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LittleManPoet, very interesting thread. I can't say, I totally agree with you, but then again, I have never really considered the idea. Very interesting.
I assume you are referring to the 'Dead Marshes', and the thought of the land being alive? I always thought, it was the dead that were 'alive' and corrupted and twisted the area in there own way. Making the plants and rocks and sth, act as a part of their own 'spirit'. If you could call it such. Quote:
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I think, zifnab, that Tolkien is working on both levels at once, that the dead in the Dead Marshes are, frankly dead, and at the same time he personifies the place itself as a livid festering wound. My interest and goal for this thread is to do an appreciation of this particular aspect of Tolkien's skill as a writer (who should be hailed as that, and should be considered to stand shoulder to shoulder - perhaps head and shoulder above - with Steinbeck, Golding, and any other major 20th century author you can think of).
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I've got a great one for you! As they ride blithely on, the Hobbits are surveying -- our own Barrow-Downs!!
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I've always been partial to this one:
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This whole scene seems to have been built for Tolkien out of his experience in the trenches of WWI; don't you think? Greasy surfaces of sullen waters. The liquid residue from internal combustion engines comes to mind, although it could just as well be the decay of the livid weed itself. As you can tell I'm making a slow read of it this time... [ May 12, 2002: Message edited by: littlemanpoet ] |
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Faramir's vision of Boromir is powerful. I had forgottn how much so.
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Wonderful topic, littlemanpoet, and in paging through the RotK for the examples I wanted, I found it true that Tolkien described evil settings most vividly (lividly?!), as Mr. Underhill suggested. Here are several glimpses of Mount Doom that struck me:
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Passages like these are the reason I can reread LotR again and again…
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05-20-2002, 07:38 PM | #15 |
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I loved your examples, Estelyn. I never realized until you put them together, Mt. Doom essentially is described as a dragon! This may BE Tolkien's best dragon, littlemanpoet! Your last quote, Estelyn, is actually of the end of Barad-Dur-- Sam is watching Sauron's fortress crumble from the door Sammath Naur on Mt. Doom. 'Eyeless prisons' is a fascinating term to use for Sauron's fortress, gates of adament subtly raises the earlier 'proud and bitter crown,' a phrase I love. Then the falling is so reminiscent of the drowning of Numenor. Lovely.
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"North amid their noisome pits lay the first of the great heaps and hills of slag and broken rock and blasted earth, the vomit of the maggot-folk of Mordor;" (V, 10)
`That is the fairest of all the dwellings of my people. There are no trees like the trees of that land. For in the autumn their leaves fall not, but turn to gold. Not till the spring comes and the new green opens do they fall, and then the boughs are laden with yellow flowers; and the floor of the wood is golden, and golden is the roof, and its pillars are of silver, for the bark of the trees is smooth and grey. So still our songs in Mirkwood say. My heart would be glad if I were beneath the eaves of that wood, and it were springtime! ' (Legolas, II, 6) "A swooning light faint filtered in, for facing North they looked o'er the leagues of the lands of mourning, o'er the bleak boulders, o'er the blistered dunes and dusty drouth of Dor-na-Fauglith; o'er that Thirsty Plain, to the threatening peaks, now glimpsed grey through the grim archway, of the marching might of the Mountains of Iron, and faint and far in the flickering dusk the thunderous towers of Thangorodrim." (Lays, I ii) "They came now from the north, for so Mîm had led them, and the light of the westering sun fell upon the crown of Amon Rûdh, and the seregon was all in flower. "See! There is blood on the hill-top," said Andróg. "Not yet," said Túrin." (UT, II 6) 'And, Legolas, when the torches are kindled and men walk on the sandy floors under the echoing domes, ah! then, Legolas, gems and crystals and veins of precious ore glint in the polished walls; and the light glows through folded marbles, shell-like, translucent as the living hands of Queen Galadriel. There are columns of white and saffron and dawn-rose, Legolas, fluted and twisted into dreamlike forms; they spring up from many-coloured floors to meet the glistening pendants of the roof: wings, ropes, curtains fine as frozen clouds; spears, banners, pinnacles of suspended palaces! Still lakes mirror them: a glimmering world looks up from dark pools covered with clear glass; cities. such as the mind of Durin could scarce have imagined in his sleep, stretch on through avenues and pillared courts, on into the dark recesses where no light can come. And plink! a silver drop falls, and the round wrinkles in the glass make all the towers bend and waver like weeds and corals in a grotto of the sea. Then evening comes: they fade and twinkle out; the torches pass on into another chamber and another dream. There is chamber after chamber, Legolas; hall opening out of hall, dome after dome, stair beyond stair; and still the winding paths lead on into the mountains' heart. Caves! The Caverns of Helm's Deep! Happy was the chance that drove me there! It makes me weep to leave them. [...] We would tend these glades of flowering stone, not quarry them.' (Gimli, III, 8) `Day is near,' he whispered, as if Day was something that might overhear him and spring on him. `Sméagol will stay here: I will stay here, and the Yellow Face won't see me.' (IV, 2) Also consider the issuing forth of the host of Minas Morgul, and the hobbits in the Withywindle valley for examples of Tolkien's 'magical realism'. Obviously, the view of an animated nature is not only provided by an author on his work of sub-creation, but also, and mainly, by the dramatis personae themselves within their world. [ May 21, 2002: Message edited by: Sharku ] |
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Thanks, Estelyn, for the great examples. Mount Doom as a dragon. Yes, Nar, I think it gets my vote - er - but I sure do like Chrysophylax - augh! I can't decide. [img]smilies/confused.gif[/img]
Sharku, thanks for your examples also. I love alliterative verse. It just sparkles - if you like it, I suppose. Some people seem to think that it's over the top. Not me. At the Forbidden Pool in Henneth Annun: Quote:
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... gritted teeth ...
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The dense and painterly (or photographic) style of description used by Tolkien, with it's narrative undertone (foreboding obviously, or hope - the landscape where Frodo and Sam meet Faramir, for example), seems to me more redolent of 19th century writing than the 20th. Parts of Poe's Masque Of The Red Death, or anything by Joseph Conrad, are in a similar vein. Of modern authors, perhaps JG Ballard has the same visual attentiveness, wrapped around dialogue that is by contrast starkly laconic. The modern trends have been away from grand metaphor and simile, and the opening of literature to a wider cross-cultural audience and authorship has led to a range of equally valid forms, from the colloquial to patois and so on. And a simple economy of narrative certainly has its place (not in my posts here, obviously [img]smilies/wink.gif[/img] ) A great book? LotR, certainly. Tolkien the best writer of the 20th century? Based on LotR alone, I would say not. Based on his canon, certainly not. But we've already had that discussion, which was eventually adjudged a somewhat of a "no result" as the protagonists (including yours truly) ground themselves into inextricable entrenchment, like the last great barques of an ancient armada, angular sculptures of black-brown driftwood that seemed to groan silently under the weight of their own failed expectations, and in that melancholy rootless, yet somehow fixed forever in golden sand that bore their wheeling and spiked shadows without complaint, and still glistened at sunrise, like a half-forgotten dream, with the memory of spray and wash, the salmon leap and the dark, burrowing mollusc, preserving a timeless hope in its yielding texture, like the .... erm ... etc. etc. [img]smilies/smile.gif[/img] Apologies for the mischief [img]smilies/tongue.gif[/img] I think the living dead marshes were more of an atmospheric device than a specific kind of natural phenomenon that can be rationalised within Tolkien's cosmogony. Whilst some precursive elements of Gaia theory may arguably be superimposed on Tolkien's intuitive and poetic sense of the land, the recent philosophical notion of "living earth", with its comprehensive ecological paradigm, is not really inferred. The Tolkienesque kind of allusion can also be found in the work of the poets of the First World War in their reflections of battlefields and the pretty fields of France that became the great graveyards of that war. Peace [img]smilies/smile.gif[/img] |
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Yesssss! [img]smilies/biggrin.gif[/img] [img]smilies/biggrin.gif[/img] Thank you, Kalessin, for picking up on what I had more or less hoped and intended out of this thread in the first place (but expanded it for a wider discussing audience).
Actually, I think you must have read a pre-edited form of this post, since I think I decided to chuck all that in order to get the wider audience. Hmmm. Anyway: And now for it: Yes, I am aware that Tolkien's style is, as you say, not modern as in Steinbeck and the others. In theme, however, I think he is forgotten in error. He is thoroughly modern in what the story is all about. I will not go into a laundry list of themes and expose myself to either extreme of (1) "you forgot the theme of -fill in the blank-", or (2) "the story is simply about itself". As you pointed out, he shares World War One experience with others - I would go so far as to say "modern war" experience. As I have said before, this book could not have been written in any century other than when it was, and of course, Tolkien being a lover of language among other things, HIS story is unlike Steinbeck and most of the other 20th century greats in that it is (out on a limb here) not self-consciously written in order to be published for the writer to be recognized as a relevant author. Rather, it is written foremost because Tolkien loved telling stories. I may have garbled that badly. |
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It would seem I need to try again, and for a bit more clarity this time.
I hope, Kalessin, to mark off, with your cooperation (and others who care to join this little dicussion): 1) aspects in which Tolkien may be adjudged inferior, as a writer, to the 20th century greats; 2) aspects in which Tolkien may be adjudged superior, as a writer, to the 20th century greats; and 3) aspects in which Tolkien may be adjudged to be marking out new territory and therefore not comparable to the 20th century greats, while still worth considering among the 20th century greats. This will require outlining a basically agreeable list of 20th century greats, writing in English. And before we get any further with this, I propose that we move this particular discussion to the Any Valid Criticisms thread and leave this one to pursue an appreciation of Tolkien's description. To that end I will quote this post on that thread. See you there, I hope. |
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Back to the appreciations. From Journey to the Crossroads:
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"Sun" is capitalized. I hadn't noticed that before. Does Tolkien always capitalize it? |
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Hmmm [img]smilies/confused.gif[/img]
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Perhaps the more interesting comparison - and one I made in another thread - is between Lord of the Rings - as in some ways the 'epiphany' of Tolkien's writing career : one work that, completed and published, contained itself all those elements that exemplify his creative vision, and all the elements that can explain his standing and popularity - and, for example, Ulysses by James Joyce, which is arguably the same kind of single cathartic tour de force, unmatched by his other works before or since. These "one-hit wonders" of the 20th century (I'm not being crass, just trying to put a framework on this kind of analysis), might include LotR, Ulysses, Catch 22, Catcher In The Rye, Lolita, Invisible Man, On The Road, Brave New World, Native Son, Under The Volcano, The Little Prince etc. etc. . My view would be that Tolkien's Lord of the Rings is certainly one of the great books of the 20th century. That's not exactly the same as saying Tolkien is one of the best writers of the century, because of the reasons I gave above. The Silmarillion, unfinished as it is, is 'a different animal' altogether - and if it had originally been published instead of LotR, most of us might never have heard of Tolkien 50 years later [img]smilies/tongue.gif[/img] I don't want to go into reasons, because in the end oppositional arguments will inevitably deconstruct each other and themselves (and result in : Kalessin vs Aiwendil III [img]smilies/wink.gif[/img] ) because of the subjectivity of language and interpretation. Simply saying "Tolkien is the best because of his wonderful use of tergivisation", or "Chapter One of the Silmarillion is the best thing ever because I like it more than everything else I've ever read", or "well, to me, Tolkien writes non-fiction ... every word is true" ( [img]smilies/rolleyes.gif[/img] ), may not actually lead us to any satisfactory conclusions. I suppose it also depends upon whether people are willing to change their views! But, I guess, I'm always interested in what people think. And "high-falutin' literary chat" is good for my snobbish self-esteem [img]smilies/smile.gif[/img] Over to you ... Peace [img]smilies/smile.gif[/img] [ May 23, 2002: Message edited by: Kalessin ] |
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I'm not as well read as I ought to be. Of the books you listed, I haven't read one. Therefore, my opinions would be based largely in ignorance. Sorry to disappoint. Although I have read Orwell, Hemingway and Steinbeck - also Fitzgerald. As far as my opinion counts, therefore, I would have to agree with your summation that Tolkien's LotR is one of the great books of the 20th century, and leave whether he is one of the best for more informed minds.
I guess my main contention is that Tolkien deserves recognition as a serious and profound 20th century author whose thought partakes of the three main currents in Western culture: Germanic (broadly speaking) cultural base; Greek-inherited rational/scientific/knowledge gathering process; and Judeo-Christian cosmological/moral framework. Tolkien does better with this than many other 20th century authors because he had a full grasp of all three and embraced them, while his counterparts tended to wrestle against and reject at least one of the three. Thus, LotR is, for the 20th century, a fresh embodiment of all three currents which satisfies the soul of some 20th/21st century Westerns. It achieves this by partaking of myth and story instead of setting up one more rational house-of-cards thesis, only to be blown over by the next antithesis. The majority of 20th century greats rejected Christianity as it had been received by them. There were some who preferred to reject Greek inherited rational processes, resulting in varities of rank subjectivism. Others rejected the Germanic base along with Christianity, resulting in the vagueries as the New Age movement. You know, this could become a book, I'm thinking. And it certainly needs some clarification and research. Hmmmm... |
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Thanks for clarifying where you are coming from ...
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For example, the Western philosophical (and later scientific) tradition, as history has shown, has in fact presented Christianity with its greatest challenge from medieval times onwards. Tolkien's work does not seem to me to take account of later philosophical or scientific elements - it seems more of a nostalgic retrenchment in myth as a vessel for arguably 'timeless' truths. And to instil - or perhaps assume - some level of traditional Christian sensibility. In this context, Albert Camus' The Outsider, or the works of Sartre, are arguably far more in tune with Western philosophy as it had come to be by Tolkien's time. Your reference points also seem to exclude (or preclude) cultural sources other than traditional Western as an indication of merit. What about Isabell Allende, Gabriel Garcia Marquez, Indian writers (or even Westernised Asians like Salman Rushdie), or VS Naipaul (from the Caribbean), winner of last year's Nobel Prize for Literature? In addition, I wonder why 'embracing' cultural traditions is somehow better than 'rejecting' them. Surely part of what great art can be about is the changing of perceptions, breaking the mould, and so on. For example, Black American authors of the 20th century did just that, along with gay and feminist artists, and so on. Trying to find reasons why Tolkien is better than everyone else is, I think, a problematic and ultimately impossible task. But even the act of placing Tolkien is the context of world literature in the 20th century is highly challenging ... there is so much to consider! Still, go for it if you want to [img]smilies/smile.gif[/img] ... and get reading - there are thousands of truly wonderful and potentially life-changing 20th century books out there. Peace [img]smilies/smile.gif[/img] [ May 29, 2002: Message edited by: Kalessin ] |
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As I said on another thread, Kalessin, I wonder if you tend to believe that since something is recent it is therefore better? I doubt that you would assert any such thing, but could it be that such thinking forms a paradigmatic background for your assertions?
Tolkien's work is Western, and the era in which he wrote had not yet seen the onset of world literature; therefore, it may be necessary to think in terms of pre-global comparisons precisely because that is Tolkien's context. As I have said already, I don't consider it important to assert that Tolkien was greater than other pre-global 20th century authors. Rather, critics and readership would do well to appreciate Tolkien's achievements for what they are. Since his writing is Western, these three strands were his milieu, as they were for all other pre-global Western writers. In that context, Tolkien seems to me to be more at home with all three strands (aka Germanic, Christian, and Greek); it has come to my attention that there is a fourth strand, the Celtic, which may have something to do with this at-homeness. Tolkien's work takes no account of the things you mention because he 1) (obviously) wrote before those things had necessarily come to be; 2) was instead interested in telling a great story instead of getting caught up in debates and struggles he had already resolved for himself; 3) considered (I wager) some of the things you describe as late developments to be the kind of thing that he would call a new form of old evils, such as the Machine age and relativism. What philosophical and scientific elements do you refer to? |
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