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gandalf85 · 12-23-2018, 12:29 PM

Fin, I really like this version. I too was worried about "changing the facts" by implying both Galadriel and Celeborn fortified against Sauron since this is not explicitly stated (even though I think it's reasonable to assume Galadriel was involved, the text does not support this).

Findegil · 12-23-2018, 02:34 PM

Thanks for catching that typo. Yes, the flow and understandability good now. So fear that we might have again many discussion about this chapter if Aiwendil will come to read it. But that is as it is and we can only wait and see.

Respectfully
Findegil

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12-23-2018, 12:29 PM	#1
gandalf85 Wight Join Date: Mar 2014 Posts: 121	Fin, I really like this version. I too was worried about "changing the facts" by implying both Galadriel and Celeborn fortified against Sauron since this is not explicitly stated (even though I think it's reasonable to assume Galadriel was involved, the text does not support this).

12-23-2018, 02:34 PM	#2
Findegil King's Writer Join Date: Jul 2002 Posts: 1,721	Thanks for catching that typo. Yes, the flow and understandability good now. So fear that we might have again many discussion about this chapter if Aiwendil will come to read it. But that is as it is and we can only wait and see. Respectfully Findegil