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The Werewolf's Companion
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I think his post is much later in the "day" than we are right now. It'd have happened before you guys ended the drill, though, so I think we can safely assume Wylflaed and Lilige would find out about when the drill ended...or at least, that's the assumption I've been under. Anyone else have a clearer idea?
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![]() Legate, I shall look forward with excitement to your PM. -- Foley
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A Voice That Gainsayeth
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Okay... by the way, while writing a part of the PM post for Foley, I have realised once again that maybe just a brief summary of the NPC soldiers of Athanar's household who have been mentioned this far might come handy. Thus, I have made just a short "list" now to sort of review their personalities, for everybody who might be interested in using them. I basically used all the facts we have "learned" about them (from their actions this far) and tried to make them fit into some logical frame. There have been, this far, unless I have missed something, two of these soldiers introduced by me and two introduced by Nogrod, all of them have participated in more than one post (I have used Nogrod's soldiers - Baldwic and Fearghall - in a really brief appearance in the first evening banquet discussion in Coenred's presence). Right at this moment I assume all of those, with the exception of Scyrr, are attending the training.
I will post the list as a separate post, perhaps pio could then link it to the character list just as NPCs, so that everybody can look it up if they want to? It's really very little in terms of actual information, but at least for now - until their personalities are developed better - it might be good, I think.
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A Voice That Gainsayeth
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Here it goes
A LIST OF SOME ATHANAR'S SOLDIERS (for the time being)
*** ÁFORGLAED - younger (in early 20s after the timejump), somewhat "unlucky fellow" whose main problem is that he cannot foresee the course of his actions and because of his tongue which he just cannot watch well enough he can easily get himself into bad situations. Got himself into a brawl with Matrim, later avoided punishment. Is a buddy with Scyrr. Áforglaed is a bit of a coward, but also in the sense that if saying "sorry" is the easy way to solve the problem, he does it. And in that, he is honest (i.e. not hypocritically just saying "sorry" to get away with anything, he usually genuinely feels sorry, only in many times apologizing just might not be enough). View of Scarburg: in the beginning somewhat negative, although he has the good chance of adapting himself. BALDWIC SON OF BALDWIN - young, a bit insecure and unsure of himself. Had "sort of befriended Wilheard on the way to Scarburg" (Lommy) and the two of them had been recently training together. Baldwic seems to be fond of Wilheard, and same the other way around, even though Wilheard thinks Baldwic "still a bit of a baby". View of Scarburg: not specified. FEARGHALL - possibly a bit older and generally more experienced, a rather balanced person, calmness is his name (this far, in every scene where he was present, his only attribute expressed was being "calm"). View of Scarburg: so far somewhat positive, had been expecting worse. SCYRR - the type of person who speaks his mind openly, no matter what others think. A bit arrogant and self-centered. He can control himself in front of higher authorities (to an extent), but to his equals or, Valar forbid, to those below him in rank he can be just downright mean if there is even the tiniest thing which might annoy him about them. In other words: if you are being annoying (and you are not being a noble or something like that), you just deserve to be informed about that (in which way might depend on the circumstances. If you are too annoying and seem not to be willing to change your behavior, you may as well be "cured" from your lack of manners by physical punishment). Scyrr feels "on the same boat" with people he has known for a long time, and definitely now, in "hostile environment" he is more likely to stick to his comrades from Athanar's household (even possibly Hilderinc, whom he finds to be an annoying man who does not stick with the collective, but now he is still "closer" than the "foreigners"). His character traits got Scyrr to being almost strangled by Erbrand, when Scyrr, being annoyed by the smell of Erbrand's tanning and after Erbrand dared to gainsay to him, got into a fight with the tanner. View of Scarburg: definitely negative (but from the objective point of view, Scyrr complains about anything that does not suit him, Scarburg is just not an exception - that, however, does not make any difference on the outside). Where there is but a single thing to criticise, Scyrr goes for it. (He would, however, never dare to criticise - certainly not openly - anybody who is superior to him, which would likely include even the original Scarburgian "nobility" like Saeryn etc.) ------------------------------------ LINKED ~*~ Pio
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"Should the story say 'he ate bread,' the dramatic producer can only show 'a piece of bread' according to his taste or fancy, but the hearer of the story will think of bread in general and picture it in some form of his own." -On Fairy-Stories Last edited by Legate of Amon Lanc; 05-30-2015 at 03:38 PM. |
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Thanks for the NPC-list & descriptions Legate!
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Also, feel free to "end the drill" if there is not so much to write there. You could write something between the soldiers after the drills - when they are just drawing breath on the fields they have been practising. In that way it would be easier to keep the timelines separate. I mean if you write the soldiers back to the Hall we'll easily get confused with different timelines. But that also means we should probably hurry up with any things that should happen at the Hall menawhile the soldiers are having their practise. I'm kind of torn now between writing something for Athanar and waiting for Nerindel to come up with some ideas... Anway. I'll be having somewhat better time in my hands from Thu-Fri onwards so maybe I'll just wait for tomorrow at least before writing anything just by myself. But yes, let's get this thing moving again... and I see you're doing just that.
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A Voice That Gainsayeth
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Just edit/enlarge Legate's descriptions as needed on his post - that way there is no need for me to edit the link. Thanks! ~*~ Pio
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