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![]() Trust me, it was not a big deal to write her out from there... it took like five minutes... and as I said, I think it turned out even better this way. I was afraid you three had made a colossal post where you all discussed why Aedre should not be shown to Athanar in the first place, or speculated why he should not know of the incident... All that time and effort of three people would naturally override the toils of one, so I was looking at the worst scenario... ![]() But then again, now all you others have gotten a glimpse into lord Athanar's soul as otherwise I would not have told you what went on in his mind when he made the speech... ![]()
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Mnemo's, Nienna's & Lottie's post is now readable in the save block just before lord Athanar's speech.
Nice post!
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Lovely post.
![]() I think I might post Hilderinc's thoughts about the banquet, though I don't want to be the first one in the line ![]()
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I will probably write something concerning the "craftsmen's table" on Sunday as Cnebba will definitively not be able to restrain himself when lord Athanar speaks of the need to behave with Aedre... ![]() Also I'm waiting for a confirmation from Form as he sent me earlier a detailed analysis of how Náin would react and it's all up to whether he makes a post of it himself or whether I embed some of those reactions into my post as I have them with me. So the game is open. Pick your table and let it go! There is no need to wait for Saeryn or Thornden to speak first! On the contrary, it would be good to have a few posts in before Foley writes what they say publicly. Also you Foley might write a post first on what Saeryn / Thornden think - or what they talk to each other - and to whomever is sitting at their table *coughDegascough* before going on with the speech(es)? So reactions during lord Athanar's speech, discussions afterwards... there should be a lot to say for everyone.
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Foley & Nienna!
Reading back things to check a few details I got an interesting idea you might wish to consider. So Javan went to find comfort from his horse - and Aedre is willing... well to do about the same thing. So if Javan would skip the meeting at the Hall - not willing to show his face there - he might actually end up in the stables again. And thus while everyone else is in the Hall the two would meet in the stables, also learning they both find comfort from their horses. An interesting situation indeed and making their relationship a bit more complicated still! ![]() If you decide to go for that I can edit my post where lord Athanar glances at Javan while speaking. Just an idea...
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