Tapestry of Dreams, Part 2 Discussion - The Barrow-Downs Discussion Forum

mark12_30 · 02-20-2009, 09:49 PM

Wow! TID is up to 89 chapters?? Prolific Elempi!

And this-- ...did I say February... I was feeling vaguely tardy anyway.

I have a few more posts in me, so relax and read for a bit. The challenge of the 'game' is that no one knows the song of the stream but the girl, whom nobody can find (and NImrodel has yet to discover that it's her.) The song is hidden deep in Amroth's heart, but she has to choose to seek for it there and that will take a bit of trust-gaining.

Ayone can play but we especially need Indil/Mithrellas/Angela, who can mirror Nimrodel's already weary/not yet aware/ will be reunited theme. Nimrodel has gone back to 'innocent child' for the duration of the game, and I think that will be her healing, when she finds the song. However her childlikeness throws Amroth a little off kilter.

Tharonwe can cause some grief, or Jorje some comic relief.

It's been long enough since I reread/listened to the story that I'm fuzzy again. But at least the past cou-ple pages worked most everybody in at least once. That's good, I won't feel guilty if someone gets a little neglected (Aedegard, where are you?)

Alak? You out there? Feel free to run with Erebemlin, and I sent Avarien to the borders of Lorien to bring Taitheneb back into the story. He can play from Lorien, she'll connect him with what's going on at the mountainside dale. THey can hunt for the song together. Ultimately Amroth has it, but I couldn't leave Taitheneb out of the tale at its climax...

littlemanpoet · 02-20-2009, 11:43 PM

Okay, that helps. But it's late and the creative juices are not flowing right now. I think I'll reread the last few pages when I get a chance, and see how that helps. At the moment I'm feeling rather intimidated by Indil/Angela/Mithrellas, but maybe rereading will help.

TID? Prolific? Nah. I just can't help it. And the last three chapter I wrote, I've scrapped because they didn't work; so ch. 89 just became ch 86. Ho hum.

alaklondewen · 02-21-2009, 11:10 AM

I'm here, I'm here.

I need to reread a bit to get in the flow and I'll just jump in as I have time.

02-20-2009, 09:49 PM	#1
mark12_30 Stormdancer of Doom Join Date: Jan 2002 Location: Elvish singing is not a thing to miss, in June under the stars Posts: 4,349	Wow! TID is up to 89 chapters?? Prolific Elempi! And this-- ...did I say February... I was feeling vaguely tardy anyway. I have a few more posts in me, so relax and read for a bit. The challenge of the 'game' is that no one knows the song of the stream but the girl, whom nobody can find (and NImrodel has yet to discover that it's her.) The song is hidden deep in Amroth's heart, but she has to choose to seek for it there and that will take a bit of trust-gaining. Ayone can play but we especially need Indil/Mithrellas/Angela, who can mirror Nimrodel's already weary/not yet aware/ will be reunited theme. Nimrodel has gone back to 'innocent child' for the duration of the game, and I think that will be her healing, when she finds the song. However her childlikeness throws Amroth a little off kilter. Tharonwe can cause some grief, or Jorje some comic relief. It's been long enough since I reread/listened to the story that I'm fuzzy again. But at least the past cou-ple pages worked most everybody in at least once. That's good, I won't feel guilty if someone gets a little neglected (Aedegard, where are you?) Alak? You out there? Feel free to run with Erebemlin, and I sent Avarien to the borders of Lorien to bring Taitheneb back into the story. He can play from Lorien, she'll connect him with what's going on at the mountainside dale. THey can hunt for the song together. Ultimately Amroth has it, but I couldn't leave Taitheneb out of the tale at its climax... __________________ ...down to the water to see the elves dance and sing upon the midsummer's eve.

02-21-2009, 11:10 AM	#3
alaklondewen Song of Seregon Join Date: Feb 2002 Location: Following the road less traveled Posts: 1,193	I'm here, I'm here. I need to reread a bit to get in the flow and I'll just jump in as I have time. __________________ At last I understand why we have waited! This is the ending. Now not day only shall be beloved, but night too shall be beautiful and blessed and all its fear pass away!

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02-20-2009, 11:43 PM	#2
littlemanpoet Itinerant Songster Join Date: Jan 2002 Location: The Edge of Faerie Posts: 7,066	Okay, that helps. But it's late and the creative juices are not flowing right now. I think I'll reread the last few pages when I get a chance, and see how that helps. At the moment I'm feeling rather intimidated by Indil/Angela/Mithrellas, but maybe rereading will help. TID? Prolific? Nah. I just can't help it. And the last three chapter I wrote, I've scrapped because they didn't work; so ch. 89 just became ch 86. Ho hum.