Tapestry of Dreams, Part 2 Discussion - The Barrow-Downs Discussion Forum

Formendacil · 05-16-2007, 07:35 PM

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Originally Posted by littlemanpoet

I'm wondering if Formy and Celuien can do something about their 'saves' in the next couple days? Just in case you might have forgotten it was even there....

See... I was GOING to fill that save on the evening of Saturday, April 21st... but as I was in emergency and the X-ray room, that didn't transpire...

Still, you have caught me on a guilty evening, with a very quiet few days ahead. If I haven't filled my save BEFORE Saturday, you have my permission to... um... I dunno, hit me or something. On my lower left leg.

Celuien · 05-16-2007, 10:50 PM

I can...it would have been filled before if not for some celebratory events here.

Couple of days should do it. If not, throw a frozen herring (or something) at me.

Imladris · 05-17-2007, 04:32 AM

I'll try to post something soon...(something's been percolating...but you know how it is) when I don't feel so deadly exhausted.

littlemanpoet · 05-17-2007, 09:33 AM

I gue------ss I can wait that long.

Formendacil · 05-18-2007, 07:19 PM

Save filled.

Elempi's decision to have the menfolk take an about-turn has pretty much resolved Bergil's dilemma, which is fine with me since I couldn't think of a satisfying way to resolve Bergil's character with the idea of taking Indil into the wilds.

However, in reading on... I'd like to quibble with Elempi about the phrasing of Bergil's reply regarding the fastness of Elessar's prisons. The line currently reads:

Quote:

"None can escape from the prisons of Elessar," Bergil asserted. "They are too well watched by the Tower Guard."

Something about it doesn't sound like Bergil to me. A little bit too... earnest maybe? I envision Bergil as young, perhaps naive, but he's a ranger who's been serving for some years now, and he lived through the Siege of Minas Tirith. I envision him as rather more serious...

Anyways, my proposed revision of the line is more one of wording than content:

Quote:

"I doubt if he could escape the prisons of Elessar," Bergil asserted. "The Tower Guard watches them most vigilantly."

littlemanpoet · 05-18-2007, 07:35 PM

The change has been made, Formy.

05-16-2007, 10:50 PM	#2
Celuien Riveting Ribbiter Join Date: May 2005 Location: Assigned to Mordor Posts: 1,767	I can...it would have been filled before if not for some celebratory events here. Couple of days should do it. If not, throw a frozen herring (or something) at me. __________________ People assume that time is a strict progression of cause to effect. But actually, from a non-linear, non-subjective viewpoint, it's more like a big ball of wibbly-wobbly, timey-wimey... stuff.

05-17-2007, 04:32 AM	#3
Imladris Tears of the Phoenix Join Date: Jun 2003 Location: Putting dimes in the jukebox baby. Posts: 1,453	I'll try to post something soon...(something's been percolating...but you know how it is) when I don't feel so deadly exhausted. __________________ I'm sorry it wasn't a unicorn. It would have been nice to have unicorns. I'm your huckleberry.

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05-17-2007, 09:33 AM	#4
littlemanpoet Itinerant Songster Join Date: Jan 2002 Location: The Edge of Faerie Posts: 7,066	I gue------ss I can wait that long.

05-18-2007, 07:35 PM	#6
littlemanpoet Itinerant Songster Join Date: Jan 2002 Location: The Edge of Faerie Posts: 7,066	The change has been made, Formy.