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Messenger of Hope
Join Date: Jun 2005
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lol! Elempi! You didn't have to do that. I was teasing.
But I'll change it, of course, according to what you want. Not now...I'm on my way (or supposed to be on my way) out the door. So...this evening, when I get back, I'll change my post. -- Folwren
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Messenger of Hope
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Well, sir, the edit is done. Javan can't blame it on Falco quite as much now. Does my edit look alright?
-- Folwren
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Messenger of Hope
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I really don't know what to do right now. I'm not particularly good at writing battles or fighting scenes. I'd be willing to do a post during it, but if someone else could move in, that'd probably be good. Thornden may be in the lead, but Folwren isn't good at making plans like this. So if I write anything, it'd probably be really poorly done.
Sorry to triple post. -- Foolwren
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Something like a basic description of the situation around the ruins might be helpful... How many outlaws, what they're doing, are Eodwine and the twins still hiding or captured already, what do the outlaws want; robbing, ransom (taking that they recognise lord Eodwine), just being brutal...?
Lmp and Celuien, I'll PM you in a minute with an idea that's somewhat unrelated to what Thornden and the rescue-party will do...
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Itinerant Songster
Join Date: Jan 2002
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I've given you some clues already, Foley. There are about a dozen outlaws (give or take); no horses. Some barking and growling can be heard. Thornden has already been to the ruins, so recall what he saw last time, and throw in some outlaws running about, or under cover and sending arrows flying at the would-be rescuers. This is, by the way, a pretty brutal group, to use Nogrod's word.
Leave Rilef to me, please. None of the party will find him until I reveal his situation. |
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Messenger of Hope
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Quote:
-- Folwren
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