Abduction in Edoras Discussion Thread - The Barrow-Downs Discussion Forum

Taralphiel · 03-19-2007, 03:14 AM

*stops dragging her feet* n.n;;;

You'll have my final post soon. I'm almost reluctant to see Sorn off, especially with Jenny not around, but I suppose it can't be avoided.

Please forgive me if I take a while crafting it. I'm not very good at final posts! *giggle*

- Tara

Anguirel · 03-19-2007, 01:12 PM

And your final post kills off Gurth, so I s'pose my final post is already done...

I'm quite looking forward to seeing the giant die!

Firefoot · 04-04-2007, 04:54 PM

So here's what I'm thinking...

I'll put up my last post for Scyld, so that the good guys can get on with finding Linduial and we can work this into some kind of conclusion. Whatever needs to happen with Gurth and Sorn can be inserted when those posts are done.

Also - I wouldn't mind feedback on this post, as far as Linduial goes, if something I have her say/do seems out of character.

Taralphiel · 04-05-2007, 07:21 AM

Good work, Fire! It looks good to me.

My last post for Sorn is coming along, but I'm not completely satisfied with it. I also have to check some things with others in PMs. But it will be up soon.

- Tara

littlemanpoet · 04-08-2007, 02:31 PM

Three cheers for Scyld! Three cheers for Firefoot! Quite the moving narrative.

I don't know what the rest of you think, but the thing feels finished to me. Sure, we could have Linduial rescued and have some kind of wrap-up scene, but do we really need it?

And when's Scyld coming to EMH?

Taralphiel · 04-08-2007, 06:54 PM

Is my last post still required?

I have it here, though I'm worried it might make everything feel a little 'jerky' after Fire's post.

Please let me know.

- Tara

Firefoot · 04-08-2007, 09:06 PM

It's about Sorn's death, right? Sorn's dead in my last post, so just have it inserted before mine... if you post it here, I could even put it before my post.

I think that it should definitely be put in, though - right now the flow is a little off, they were fighting and all of a sudden they're dead without any death scene.

03-19-2007, 03:14 AM	#1
Taralphiel Ghost Prince of Cardolan Join Date: Apr 2002 Location: Swan Wood Posts: 649	stops dragging her feet n.n;;; You'll have my final post soon. I'm almost reluctant to see Sorn off, especially with Jenny not around, but I suppose it can't be avoided. Please forgive me if I take a while crafting it. I'm not very good at final posts! giggle - Tara Last edited by Taralphiel; 03-20-2007 at 02:56 AM.

03-19-2007, 01:12 PM	#2
Anguirel Byronic Brand Join Date: Mar 2005 Location: The 1590s Posts: 2,778	And your final post kills off Gurth, so I s'pose my final post is already done... I'm quite looking forward to seeing the giant die! __________________ Among the friendly dead, being bad at games did not seem to matter -Il Lupo Fenriso

04-05-2007, 07:21 AM	#4
Taralphiel Ghost Prince of Cardolan Join Date: Apr 2002 Location: Swan Wood Posts: 649	Good work, Fire! It looks good to me. My last post for Sorn is coming along, but I'm not completely satisfied with it. I also have to check some things with others in PMs. But it will be up soon. - Tara Last edited by Taralphiel; 04-05-2007 at 07:54 AM.

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04-04-2007, 04:54 PM	#3
Firefoot Illusionary Holbytla Join Date: Dec 2003 Posts: 7,547	So here's what I'm thinking... I'll put up my last post for Scyld, so that the good guys can get on with finding Linduial and we can work this into some kind of conclusion. Whatever needs to happen with Gurth and Sorn can be inserted when those posts are done. Also - I wouldn't mind feedback on this post, as far as Linduial goes, if something I have her say/do seems out of character.

04-08-2007, 02:31 PM	#5
littlemanpoet Itinerant Songster Join Date: Jan 2002 Location: The Edge of Faerie Posts: 7,066	Three cheers for Scyld! Three cheers for Firefoot! Quite the moving narrative. I don't know what the rest of you think, but the thing feels finished to me. Sure, we could have Linduial rescued and have some kind of wrap-up scene, but do we really need it? And when's Scyld coming to EMH?

04-08-2007, 06:54 PM	#6
Taralphiel Ghost Prince of Cardolan Join Date: Apr 2002 Location: Swan Wood Posts: 649	Is my last post still required? I have it here, though I'm worried it might make everything feel a little 'jerky' after Fire's post. Please let me know. - Tara

04-08-2007, 09:06 PM	#7
Firefoot Illusionary Holbytla Join Date: Dec 2003 Posts: 7,547	It's about Sorn's death, right? Sorn's dead in my last post, so just have it inserted before mine... if you post it here, I could even put it before my post. I think that it should definitely be put in, though - right now the flow is a little off, they were fighting and all of a sudden they're dead without any death scene.