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11-07-2006, 02:41 PM
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Flame of the Ainulindalë
Join Date: Jan 2006
Location: Wearing rat's coat, crowskin, crossed staves in a field behaving as the wind behaves
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Celuien: I have used your family somewhat. Hopefully that is okay. I have tried to make things go forwards and to kind of open the wound that was never stiched among the children...
Please let me know if I have done something in a wrong way and I'll correct it.
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11-07-2006, 03:51 PM
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Riveting Ribbiter
Join Date: May 2005
Location: Assigned to Mordor
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Looks fine.
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